Date: September 16 2022 12:05 AM Title: The Mole Hill
I hope this series won't end yet right when I'm starting to love it. We need more of something like the Chapter 4
[Report This]Date: March 22 2021 12:39 PM Title: Into the Depths of Depravity
This chapter was nice and longer.
You did a good job exploring more of the family dynamic here, and how Greg is viewed overall.
I do like him jerking off to their feet in spite, and as a 'payback' tactic, only to be found at the end there caught in the act.
It'll be fun to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed.
Date: March 22 2021 12:35 PM Title: Caught Red Handed
A great follow up to the first chapter, very sexy and great GTS content.
I loved the mouth content, and the aunt's behavior here.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: March 22 2021 12:33 PM Title: A Night of Giving in
Ok, so I love the first chapter for this (I've read all three and am now reviewing them)
You definitely did a great job describing the characters here, Courtney seems like a great middle aged/milf giantess character, plump and pudgy, while having some appropriate feet for a woman of her size/build.
Love the scenes of him getting some 'righteous' revenge on his racist bigot Aunt by pleasuring himself to her feet and using he mouth XD (the added details of her having alcohol on her breath and it bombarding him was a nice visual)
And the ending XD that was great.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Think she's my most interesting character and will definitely be revisiting her.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2021 8:38 PM Title: Into the Depths of Depravity
Loving the story so far, I cant wait to see what happens next and hopefully it involves some more of Aunt Courtney. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, I eventually plan on getting back to her.
Date: January 22 2021 11:38 PM Title: A Night of Giving in
Loving it so far! The aunt dynamic is always so fun to read. I hope we get to see exactly how bad she stinks when she eats that taco bell! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you! There is definitely a chance.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2021 11:06 PM Title: Caught Red Handed
Great story so far. Absolutely love the bbw smut stuff. Will we be seeing any vagina insertion/dildo play? Also, you have it categorized as micro when it should be minikin as the main character is between 1-3 inches tall.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm planning atleast one chapter with vagina insertion, and thank you I will change it.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2021 12:46 AM Title: A Night of Giving in
I actually really like the start to this story. The power dynamic is very interesting and what appeals most to me. Here you have this giantess, who already has a dislike for you, and on top of that, she has differing political views... I find that very very erotic.
As far as criticism goes, I would say just tighten up the grammar and sentence structure a bit. I say "a bit" because your sentences are very descriptive and fun to read, but some of them would have benefited from a comma or two (Or broken up into two sentences). And just some other areas where proper punctuation and capitalization would have helped. And keep an eye on your verb tenses being consistent. None of us here are grammar Nazi’s… but it does make the story more enjoyable to read.
That aside, I really like getting to read the main characters thoughts and feelings throughout the chapter… first person is awesome for that and I really like what you’ve done so far. Funny how he was really giving it to her like he was the dominant one in charge… but I sense that dynamic is going to change pretty quick. I’m really excited to see what happens next!
Welcome to the site! Please keep writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much and I will definitely keep in mind your suggestions.