Date: January 19 2021 11:48 PM Title: It's all fun and games until someone get's swallowed
This was brilliant! Not often you get young characters like this, especially when they have such malicious intent. Loved it :) hope there is a second part!
Author's Response:
We'll have to see if it either gets another commission or gets added to my Discord story poll pool. ^-^
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: January 19 2021 4:07 AM Title: It's all fun and games until someone get's swallowed
Loved it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad ^_^
[Report This]Date: January 18 2021 7:52 PM Title: It's all fun and games until someone get's swallowed
Read the story and while i like the creativity and descriptive language, im disappointed in two things: 1. The lack of description for the events, mainly the oral vore and full tour. That was a huge missed opportunity to increase and appeal to a larger audience
2. The underage girl being a main point in an x rated story.
These two things are personal opinions, but still my view on the story. 2.5/5
Author's Response:
Fair is fair. Not every fetish is everyones cup of tea, and I understand. I was limited to 6k per the commission and I did what was asked of me and focused on. Regardless, I do hope you got some enjoyment out of it. ^_^
[Report This]Date: January 18 2021 4:40 PM Title: It's all fun and games until someone get's swallowed
Loved it! The worldbuilding details with the collander were really smart and added a lot to the narrative, and the torture was incredibly hot to read. The ploy was very fun to watch unfold. Very eager for any potential sequels in the future.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it Centimeter! This was one of the more unique stories I've done so it was definitely one I hope gets commissioned for a part 2. I may even add it to one of my story polls if it doesn't. ^_^*