[Report This]Date: April 13 2023 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
I’m a good idea man, but your writing skills are top level. The way your introduce your characters is like a pro writer. I could learn from your writing technique!
The way the female character reacted when she found out about the model village was realistic, cute, and funny, but not funny in a bad way; I look forward to reading more!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2022 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
One of my favorite things . Gigantic people arriving in a city, playfully ravaging and above all using the little people in many and varied ways for their pleasure.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2022 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
I had read this story some time ago, but now that I've read it again I think I enjoyed it even more.
Thanks for the effort and for sharing it, you are very talented:)
Date: March 16 2021 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wished it went on longer with Chloe's sourvenir life but that was a fantastic finale chapter with so many hot moments.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2021 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Faith seems rather lovely.
Date: February 21 2021 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
A fantastic story so far! Who would have thought these two would come together in the end? An unlikely duo that is just awesome to follow through this little village ;)
Date: February 08 2021 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
This was my favorite chapter so far. Being traded to a girl for a spliff is such a powerful idea, it's like poetry.
Date: February 06 2021 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Simply incredible! I love the setting - the shrinking virus/gene is still such an effective world building element in size stories. I also adore Ellie's personality and the way it contrasts with the rest of the cast. The way she seems to know exactly what she's doing at every turn makes her an even more terrifying giant in that tiny village :D
Seems I have something to look forward to on this website every week - once again!
Date: February 06 2021 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I'm so glad to see a new story from you! You have such a unique and amazing style. Your giant (normal-size) protagonist have such a powerful aura. Love it so far, can't wait to read further :D
[Report This]Date: January 22 2021 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story a lot. It's sort of like a mix of some of your other stories in terms of topic. It reminds of "Friday Night Magic" combined with your "The Benefits of Immunity" universe.
That being said it's fun to think about how characters from some of your other stories, like Brittany from "The Benefits of Immunity" or Ashleigh and Victoria from "From Powerful to Plaything" would react if they found a village like this.
I wonder how Faith and Callum will react to the new development with Pete and Ellie.
I'm very interested to see where this story goes next and hope we get to see more of Faith and Ellie rampaging about the village as something tells me Callum may be joining Pete soon.
Date: January 22 2021 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lmao nevermind I changed my mind I don't associate myself with Pete anymore, dick pics to another girl? Not cool, hope the docs fall down on him and then proceed to destroy much more!
Keep it up!
Date: January 22 2021 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Really glad you've returned to writing stories. I liked the little aside that the tinies are perverted foot fetishists so they are destined to shrink and be treated this way. Faith should tease Peter more about that before he shrinks. Also I'm imagining Ellie with bangs under her Beanie. Looking forward to the new chapter tonight!
Date: January 15 2021 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well, since my real name is Peter and I got a huge fetish for docs, I have to say I would absolutely hate it if Pete ended up not being immune, Ellie was immune and we end up seeing a bloodbath with her boyfriend... I'm gonna feel as if I'm hurt in real life! Unfortunately I think this was kind of hinted that he isn't immune by him being a bit "Under the weather" but I can still hope nevertheless. Regardless, maybe we get to see them both being immune and that's nothing to worry about, or Faith ends up being the only immune person and she gets to have a lot of fun! Also while I get the feeling Ellie is the more dominant person in the relationship I'd love to see Pete assuming command at some point (as well as callum, he does still have power since he isn't 1 inch tall) or at least him getting some kind of redemption and seeing how Ellie and him are when they aren't fighting. I've set this story up in my mind as a "couples have fun with tinies" kind of story. Stories that start off and make us like both people in the couple only to end up having one of them (usually the male) shrink and the normal sized one suddenly lose all interest in them aren't my cup of tea... I just think if one is loved when they're normally sized, they can be loved while being tiny as well ^^
That being said I am interested to see how Faith and Callum end up! I actually quite liked the fact that when Faith learned Callum isn't immune instead of just laughing at him and going something cruel/mean, she had him eat her out, it satisfied me in a good way, I expected her to just suddenly lose all respect and love she has for him which would have ticked me off definitely..!
As you can tell I do definitely look forward to more Pete/Ellie focused chapters.. After all, I do love to sometime put myself in the shoes of a character in a story and in this one I have a reason to do so as well! That, combined with my obsession with docs and gore will surely provide some interesting reactions!
All in all I'm interested to see where this story is gonna go, I don't necessarily think it's a story that should be dragged out a lot, seems like a 5-10 chapter story to me but I don't know what you have planned! And while I'm hoping for the "couples love each other and have fun with tinies" type of story, I'll most probably read the story regardless of how it turns out, I'm just hoping for frequent updates, this is my favorite story at the moment! Then again, you can't rush perfection!
Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: January 11 2021 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Feels like a departure from your usual stories. Still curious to see where it goes.
Date: January 10 2021 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
I meant to leave this review yesterday but lost track of time!
As soon as I saw a new post from gtswburg, I thought: "Sign me up!"
I plan on leaving thorough reviews on all of your stories soon, as I honestly believe that you are one of the most ccompelling writers on the site.
In terms of this story, I can't wait to see what these four get up to! I'd like to see them all hthake off their shoes and socks(and maybe eventually their pants) as they get into it! (Though I must say that I prefer the playing with shrinkees to the killing of them.)
I hope we get some details on these shrinkees as their lives are turned completely upside down by these two young couples having some fun! I also hope that the couples take some "souvenirs" back with them from this little town when they're done! If for no other reason than to make sure Ellie doesn't get too bored/frustrated. ;)
Speaking of Ellie's frustration, I don't think we've been told... Is everyone here Immune? Even our Loud-mouthed little American girl? >:) (If anything should happen, I wonder how she'd react? How would her boyfriend would react? Who would keep her?)
Keep up the great work!
Or I guess I should just say keep up the work, as it's always great from you!
Date: January 09 2021 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Very excited to see where this goes. An amazing first two chapters and i'm looking forward to more!