[Report This]Date: April 12 2021 11:41 AM Title: Part 2/4
I love this story. The scientist trying to survive, under the feet of Sam is a great premise. I wished that the scientist had a better ending, maybe you can make an alternate ending chapter where Sam somehow discovers the scientist? Great read overall though.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words. However I'm done with this particular story. But there will be more stories to come, and more fun.
Date: April 02 2021 4:24 PM Title: Part 1/4
Great read, really enjoyed it!
Awesome descriptions and amount of details here, really took me along for the ride.
I was sure that Nathan was also shrunken and lost / stepped on somewhere - his disappearance appeared too sudden and convenient, given the discovery of shrinking device in his room. The fact that this didn't materialize felt like a bit of a missed opportunity to me :)
You put great work out, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you've enjoyed this story.
Come to think of it, I probably should've done something more with the other guy. I comitted a "what happened to the mouse" trope by not doing so. Oh well, I'll keep that in mind next time. Thank you for the suggestion.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2021 1:47 AM Title: Part 4/4
Just finished the story. Loved the ending! I was gripped by the detailed writing of Jake's perspective of the giantess the whole time. Great stuff, as usual. As I said... I gotta go read your other stuff someday!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the ride, thank you. I hope you like the rest of my works. : )
Date: January 05 2021 5:50 PM Title: Part 1/4
Awesome first chapter.Loving your style and the details.
Author's Response:
Thank you Lina, I'm glad you like the story. Part 2 just dropped, enjoy.
Date: January 05 2021 2:28 PM Title: Part 1/4
Nice start. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you, more to come.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2021 5:12 AM Title: Part 1/4
Excellent work, my friend. I'm really excited to read more of this. Your writing was clean, clear, and crisp. And the descriptions of the giantess from his shrunken persepctive really got my heart pounding.
Author's Response:
Thank you, happy to hear it. More to come. : )