Date: January 19 2021 12:39 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
natalie is a character that you can love to hate lol
nice story
Author's Response:
Thank you, and yes she is!
Date: January 18 2021 11:12 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
great story I love each chapter and the content of feet, have you thought about shrinking Aubreigh to see if natalie changes the thought about her I would love to see that
Author's Response:
Thank you! And yes, I have thought about that!
[Report This]Date: January 17 2021 12:42 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Truly loving this story so far, despite not being into feet all that much. The characters are just written so well, especially Natalie of course. The description includes insertion as a tag. Will that be explored in future chapters?
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I'm really happy to hear that you enjoy the story even if you're not into feet. (I always feel sorry for people in the gts community who don't like feet! There's an abundance of that for sure!) And as for the insertion tag, (another of my favs, right after feet and vore), I have that written in my outline a few times... the first of which is scheduled for chapter 7, so yeah, the story will feature that from time to time. I hope you'll like it. Thanks for reading, and thank you very much for your review.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2021 9:01 AM Title: Sweet Dreams
I am still loving Natalie!
Her actions in this chapter wre great.
Loved the foot content, and shoe content. And now her children's friends get a small taste (especially Sophie) of how she can be.
Again I love Natalie not giving a fuck about Tinies, and you can tell she would have stomped Sophie into paste if her kids weren't there.
Her children are the only reason she's holding back as much as she is. (I kind of want to see her pushed where she'll just kill one of them regardless if her tiny kids are present)
I loved how Sophie's brevado and righteous indignation went out the window the moment she was grabbed by Natalie, the moment she realized all of her so called 'power' and being 'morally superior' meant jack shit when she was in the hands of a giantess.
I kind of want Aubreigh to be swayed to Natalie's side, maybe Natalie can slowly condition her to not care for tinies, or to see them as beneath her. With a slow but firm series of events that would reshape Aubreigh's world view.
I saw someone comment on Natalie shrinking later, but I have to say I would hate that. It would be just deserts for sure, but I am still loving Natalie and wanting her to keep on showing tinies their place, under her sexy big steamy milf feet, let the scent, heat and raw power of those soles and toes subjegate those tinies in their rightful place.
And if the tinies don't like it......well, who cares XD
But yeah, hoping Aubreigh is swayed, or shrinks herself (then Natalie could subjegate all of her children and not have to put up with any Tiny Rights rhetoric in her household, or any 'progressive' views on tinies. She would rule her household with an iron fist and a ripe pair of soles.)
Author's Response:
Man, you might not ever hate Natalie! :D I also enjoyed seeing Sophia getting the wind knocked out of her sails. That was really REALLY fun to write. And I think it was really brazen of Natalie to do it with Aubreigh in the same room. And don't worry, Natalie has alot more subjegating to do! I'm hoping I get some time to write this week. Thank you for your review and your comment, it motivates me to keep improving my writing and making the story the best it can be.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2021 7:30 AM Title: Sweet Dreams
I like it! Looking forward to more of this. You've got a great set up poised for some epic humiliations!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm trying to make them as epic as I can! Ha! Thank you for your comment!
[Report This]Date: January 17 2021 7:07 AM Title: Sweet Dreams
Another AMAZING chapter. I hate to admit it but I was refreshing the most recent page ALL week just looking for this update and man did you not disappoint.
I swear, Natalie Beaumont is the perfect blend of cruel and playful. Best story I've ever read on this site.
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you very very much! That comment made me smile! I'm happy you like it!
Date: January 10 2021 12:58 AM Title: The Emerald Package
Really good story so far, hope you continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: January 09 2021 10:27 PM Title: The Emerald Package
This story is going great! (look at all the other thoughtful reviews if you want to see exactly how :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2021 1:29 PM Title: The Emerald Package
Again, another fantastic chapter!!
I didn't realize you did a double update.
You've again done a wonderful job expanding more into this world. And I love Natalie's deal with Kelly.
Manipulating her into trying to get her daughter to change majors was perfect.
I also loved the foot content here, really well written and descriptive.
Again, it's confusing but I am loving Natalie's dominant, takes no shit attitude to the tinies.
And it's kind of realistic how she would have this view clash with her daughter's 'tiny advocacy' attitude. It mirrors real world age and generation gaps views on social issues, and in this world it makes sense.
As I said before, I normally would be on the tinies side, cheering on their fighting back of giant opression and the right to be seen as living human beings too.....but I keep veering to Natalie's side XD
I loved her interaction with the tinies, and her absolutely humiliating and subjegating Gregg under her feet and toes. How she threatened them and demoralized them and their "rights" was perfectly done and shows again that:
1) Natalie gives zero fucks about Tiny Rights, and is only barely tolerating them to the minute degree she is, due to her children. And even then when they're not around she's cutting lose with her giant-superiotity complex.
2) Tinies have no real power if humans choose not to let them have it. Their rights and jobs are really just for show or for social etiquette at best, if a human chooses to stomp a family of tinies into paste, they have no power to stop them, at least physically, and even in a legal system like this, there would be many who are still entrenched in the view of Natalie's generation, or would simply believe her if she said it was an accident, or would not look to into it. Why would they waste time and resources on tiny-killings.
If Natalie wanted to squash Gregg then and there, she could have and he could not have done a thing about it, nor could all of the tinies present. Their rights and lawful protection only holds weight if the normal sized people around the wish to abide by them, their rights are dependant on the attitude of others.
And Natalie is only playing along for the time being.
Again it's weird, but I am loving Natalie and can't wait to read more of her.
Author's Response:
Thank you. And yeah, I figured with Ch 3 not being that fetishy... it would be nice to have one that was alongside it. I'm happy you like the writing of the story so far... I try to be as descriptive as possible without ruining what things look like in other readers minds.
As for your comment... 1) Exactly! and 2) that is the interesting thing to me that I want to eplore a little further in this story, the social etiquette...the real power imbalances, and the consequences, if any. The generation gap here is where I think the tension comes from. Like, can the older or newer generation change their mentality toward things? If so, why?
I'm glad you like Natalie, she is my favorite character I've written, but I also tried to write a character I can hate. But... too bad I like characters like her!
Thank you very much for the comment and your review!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2021 4:27 AM Title: The Emerald Package
Tight! Yeah it's absurd, but honestly that's what I'm here for lol
Author's Response:
Thanks man!
[Report This]Date: January 09 2021 3:28 AM Title: Introductions Are In Order
Another great chapter :)
You are doing a great job worldbuilding here and bringing in these new characters.
XD The kids know whats up, don't piss of their Mom, she is not going to put up with shit from Tinies.
I know you said Natalie is meant to be the big bad (literally!) But I still kiiind of find myself on her side.
Which is weird, cause normally I don't go for the abusiv/big characters.....but for some reason I'm rooting for Natalie to put those kids in their place.....or else!
It's strange, but yeah I just keep picturing the tinies trying to assert any kind of authority over her, or express a morally highground argument, and Natalie just not giving a single fuck because "She's a Giantess, and they are the size of insects."
They have no power over her, she could toss them all in her mouth and eat them without any effort....and they want to talk back to this woman and try and get their own way......not the smartest of decsions
XD Still find it strange I'm on Natalie's side, but am willing and excited to ride this out (I may switch my allegiance in future, but for now I am Team Natalie)
Author's Response:
That is strange! I'm trying to write a character that I can hate. And right now... I love/hate her. But I know exactly what you mean, they really have no power over her. Thanks for reading man, and the review, I really appreciate it.
Date: January 07 2021 9:02 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Really enjoyed this story, looking forward to reading more. love the slipper time out and i look forward to seeing more of this (unaware scenes as well). Would love to see some more punishment for Thomas and his friend on the vacation (maybe keeps one of them trapped in her toe ring while enroute and pretends she knows nothing about it?)
Author's Response:
Thank you! That's a good idea! I'll implement it in a future chapter (I already know which one will work!)
Date: January 05 2021 10:42 PM Title: A Change of Plans
Besides the obvious allure of the tags, when I actually clicked on this story, you had me at "You might like it if you are foot and humiliation oriented."
I absolutely love mothers that punish and tease their shrunken little young men and women under their feet!!!
Chapter 2 was so well-written! I just love slipper time-outs. Does it really even count as time-out if Mommy doesn't put her foot in and trap her squirming kids under her playful toes? I don't think so, and I'm glad that you don't either! ;)
I can tell this story is going to be right up my alley, and I cannot wait for more!
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
That's great to hear! Haha! I'm especially glad you liked the "time-outs" in the slippers. I just have to control myself and not over do it in the story. (I look for any reason to put the kids in her slippers, lol) Thanks for reading, glad you like it!
Date: January 04 2021 12:51 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
I love this story and the character Natalie, I would like the rest of the family to shrink from the virus
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! (More will!)
[Report This]Date: January 03 2021 10:43 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
This story grabbed me almost immediately. It's now on my favorite list and I cant wait to see where things go.
Seeing as how frustrated she is with just the two kids shrunken, I'd love to see how Natalie reacted if somehow the rest of the family were to shrink and become fully dependent on her.
keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
That's awesome it grabbed you right away... I was afraid it was too slow moving. And yes, if you think she's frustrated now... just wait! haha!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2021 3:17 PM Title: A Change of Plans
Loved these first two chapter, and am so excited for more.
Can't say who I'll be rooting for by the end of this story, but at the moment, I'm kind of on Natalie's side XD
Her kids (understandably they might be a bit frustrated) but do seem to have some bratty/pain in the ass attitudes for her to deal with.
The slipper scenes were great, really well done and I loved the description of her feet and toes.
Great work and looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked those scenes! And yeah, Natalie is def the big bad in this story... but sometimes you end up siding with them. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2021 6:39 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Noice!!! Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Ha! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2021 3:36 AM Title: A Change of Plans
Great read, can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading it and reviewing it!