[Report This]Date: March 29 2021 4:20 AM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
Wow a lot happened this chapter. A tad fast for Aubreigh but well-written nonetheless. Looking forward to Natalie and Ben for sure!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you felt it was well written. And yes, a bit fast... I'm not the best at pacing and wanted to pick things up a bit. I'll have to see how it works. But she's definitely not going to be a clone of Natalie.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2021 2:27 AM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
!!!!!!!!!!!! YESSS!!!!!!!
Ok damn! This chapter was loaded with so much great content.
I love Emily and Natalie both swaying Aubreigh to the Dark Side XD
Aubreigh's slow indoctrination is now coupled with her seeing an "evil" tiny (he may have been innocent, who knows, but the giants sure think not)
And I feel that an act like he alledgedly commited would definitely push Aubreigh into a more harsh Giantess mode, and we saw this with Nate.
I am so excited for the next chapter!
You've set up some amazing content following what's happened here.
Natalie is finally showing her Tiny-Kids the depths of her thoughts on them now (the way she called Aubreigh "my real daughter" was so good! I got chills (good chills)
And the fact she's outright stated if her kids keep pushing her, she's going to kill them/stomp them/eat them.
She's really just waiting for the right moment (or to be pushed too far by her entitled Tiny kids) before killing them.
Her shutting them down with "your an inch tall" and "Your speaking words but not saying anything" was so great to hear.
And the punishment of Carmen was so cool!
It finally got Thomas to realize "Oh shit! She can punish me, my high and mighty attitude doesn't mean shit afterall" XD
I really hope Carmen unloads her anger onto him when she's released.
Bye Gregg XD (Her using him as a scare tactic was also another golden moment)
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Natalie is still an amazing badass giantess, and I can't wait to see where things go from him.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review again! I really appreciate the specific things you enjoyed reading. It helps me see what's working. But yes, I really anticipate Natalie upping the severity of her punishments and pleasures. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 28 2021 11:28 PM Title: Teaching an Old Dog New Tricks
Wow! Great job! I loved seeing Aubreigh turn like this. And Mrs. Beaumont is so mean! I love it. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I love a mean Natalie Beaumont!
[Report This]Date: March 25 2021 11:19 PM Title: One Tiny Night Stand
Hope all is well! Can't for the next update. This story is definitely one of the ones I check in on. Such a great build up with interesting characters.
[Report This]Date: March 23 2021 1:44 AM Title: One Tiny Night Stand
A shorter (but still sweet chapter)
I kind of like the long ones, but the short ones are nice too.
So much great content still coming through here, Natalie continues to be the MVP of this story, and her dominating personality is a treat to keep reading.
The absolute disregard she has for Gregg was so well shown here (as said before, tinies trying to demand equel rights and authority over a giantess like Natalie quickly fails when this woman is literally toying withi his body and overpowering him wth her fingers)
The vaginal insertion and use of him as her sex toy was sooo hot !! :D
A great read definitely.
Gregg trying to tell her to let him go home to his family.....dude, she is basically keeping you alive as a novelty/sex toy, she could snuff you out against her clitoris and not give two shits, and would probably do so 'in front' of his family and not care.
I love love love that you made Mrs Chen's sister have been killed by Natalie!!
I can't wait to see what she does to her in the next chapter.
(And as always, I am hoping Aubreigh either shrinks, or is seduced to the dark side.....or hell, Shrink Natalie's husband so she has complete control over her tiny family, and have Aubreigh full sized but swayed to her mother's mentality, XD Just some suggestions)
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for reading and reviewing! Yeah I think I'm going to have to go back to longer chapters because it takes me so long to write what I want to say. (Although I feel that bogs down the plot a fair amount...) But I am having fun writing Natalie's character and so I'm glad that you are loving her domineering-ness (if that's a word?). I think I can safely admit that Aurbeigh is going to get swayed to the dark side for sure. And if I can ever get back to moving the plot forward, Natalie's husbad does shrink. I think that will be a lot of fun to write!
Thanks for the suggestions and the review!
[Report This]Date: March 17 2021 5:25 PM Title: One Tiny Night Stand
Awesome chapter! Really, really cruel cliffhanger. Nicely done!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: March 17 2021 12:26 AM Title: One Tiny Night Stand
Holy crap well worth the wait. I hope she votes Gregg before replacing him with Ben, that way there's no evidence
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2021 11:51 PM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Make the chapters as long as you want, and don't let anyone tell you different.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I might have to! It's getting hard to write everything I wanna say with such a short limit!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2021 2:07 AM Title: One Tiny Night Stand
Curious where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2021 1:55 AM Title: One Tiny Night Stand
I've really enjoyed this story so far! Natalie is certainly the star, but I also enjoy the dynamics that the other characters bring. My brain keeps getting pulled in different directions- one side wanting to just give in and root for Natalie all the way, the other side holding out hope that she might eventually get what's coming to her.
Along those lines, I thought an ironic sort of ending could be fun. Perhaps Natalie slowly breaks down Aubreigh's gentle side and turns her just as prejudiced and sadistic, only for Natalie to get the virus and shrink down, completely at the whims of the monster she helped create. Or not! I'm sure whatever you have planned will be fabulous. Take care!
-Pluto
Author's Response:
I know what you mean! I keep getting pulled in different directions as well. The writer in me wants Natalie to get whats coming (as is currently in my outline), but the fetish side of me just wants her to completely dominate and win. I actually don't know what I'm going to do yet... but I have a lot of ideas to write before I have to make a decision. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: March 09 2021 3:27 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Hope all is well! Will you be continuing the story soon?
Author's Response:
Yes! Wrote the next chapter... hated it ... deleted it ... started again. Hopefully something this weekend!
Date: March 02 2021 12:08 AM Title: Mom's Life Lesson
Love the story. Mrs Beaumont is one the meaniest giantesses you hate to love.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2021 10:46 PM Title: Aubreigh's Pedicure - Part 2
Wait, I just started thinking about Kelly! I hope she doesn't die, those words from Mrs. Beaumont are ominous! The poor girl did everything she was supposed to. Anyways, if it happens for the story, I understand, but really hope she doesn't. I'll still love the story either way.
Author's Response:
I have changed her fate and story arc 100 times in my outline... I honestly don't know what's going to happen to her either...
[Report This]Date: February 27 2021 2:53 PM Title: Aubreigh's Pedicure - Part 2
This is so good! Look forward to Natalie and Gregg then eventually Ben. Guy's a wreck lol, hopefully she'll be easier on him. Wouldn't want to break Gregg's replacement.
Author's Response:
So true, haha. Yeah, I think Natalie will be easier on Ben. I think the next chapter is going to deal with what happened when Natalie went upstairs before moving along the main plot line. Poor Gregg! Glad you liked it, thanks again for the review and comment!
Date: February 26 2021 12:50 PM Title: Aubreigh's Pedicure - Part 2
Man, I love Natalie so much... Imagine if she caught a mutated version of the virus, but instead of shrinking her, this version allowed her to spread a pheromone that shrinks the people around her at will. Making her unstoppable... I know it sounds silly, but I just love whenn characters like her are completely in charge
Author's Response:
Ha! She'd be unstoppable for sure!
[Report This]Date: February 26 2021 4:45 AM Title: Aubreigh's Pedicure - Part 1
Natalie Beaumont is the best! Great chapters!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yes, she is!
[Report This]Date: February 26 2021 2:31 AM Title: Aubreigh's Pedicure - Part 2
I am sorry for missing out on reviewing the past few chapters!
life has been busy lately.
You've really had some fun with Natalie these last few chapters!
I loved her putting Benjamin under her feet, and putting Gregg in her panties! Again showcasing her large and in charge personality to tinies.
I loved these chapters too with Aubreigh, it was fun seeing drunk Aubreigh letting go of her inhibitions (maybe showing deep down she has some tiny-giant dominance in her too)
or at least a playful side.
I hope Natalie uses this to sway her.
And her siblings and friends as toe spacers was so good XD (And her locking Ben outside)
I cannot wait to see what happens next, and hope Natalie puts Kelly's mother underfoot to teach her that she's got a place in life, under the feet and toes of her superiors.
Can't wait to read the next chapter when it's up :)
Author's Response:
Hey, good to hear from you! I get that about life, haha. And yeah, I've been having a lot of fun with Natalie. The stuff with Gregg and Ben was a blast to write. And with Aubreigh, yeah, I thought the "drunk giantess" trope would be fun to mess with to show what she has buried deep down, like you said. I used to read stories about people being used as toe spacers when I first discovered the fetish... but it seems like I don't see that very often anymore. Thanks for reading and thank you very much for your rating and comment! Working on the next chapter now, hopefully it will be posted soon.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2021 2:27 AM Title: Aubreigh's Pedicure - Part 2
OK wow!
Loved this double update.
Nice work seeing Aubreigh let loose and have some fun (I can see this as her stepping stone to more tiny handling and control)
And Natalie's still such a sexy giantess in charge.
I can't wait to see her put Mrs Chen in her place under her toes and scare the pants of the tiny milf.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked the update! It was fun seeing Aubreigh let loose, and it was really fun to write for her. I find it a little challenging to write for her character sometimes. But I'm looking forward to writing more about her journey. And yeah, I don't think Mrs. Chen is going to have a very good time, lol
[Report This]Date: February 26 2021 2:17 AM Title: Aubreigh's Pedicure - Part 2
A purpose for every tiny and a tiny for every purpose.
Author's Response:
That's right!
Date: February 21 2021 11:51 AM Title: Toetally Under Her Control
"The difference between you and Benjamin (...) Benjamin is a real man"
If he ever comes to know that Natalie said those words :D
Author's Response:
I know, right?!