Reviewer: SmolCrowing Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2022 11:23 PM Title: Covert Mission

I'm enjoying this so far, but don't think I didn't notice that Pitch Meeting reference when he said "super easy, barely an inconvenience" :)

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story so far. And yep, those are classics :D

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2021 3:17 AM Title: A Bargain

A very interesting chapter indeed hehe~ 

 

I liked Alex's little playtime with Ronald, and how her simple question "Can I keep him?" leads Stephanie to just casually agree, condemning Ronald and Sophie to a lifetime the size of bugs under better women's feet! 

More of Sophie being put in place by her wonderful owner, Xue. I love how the only little act of defiance she can manage, punching Xue's foot, elicits no reaction other than "Bug feel nice on my feet." She's honestly such a milf, I swear! ^^; 

Amy brings the news that Brian insists they grow back the tinies, but just before Sophie can have the chance of ever returning to her normal life, Stephanie forbids that from ever happening, much to Xue's delight and Sophie's despair. I love it. 

Amy is so cute as well, using her seductive feet and the fact that she has Brian totally under her dainty thumb to her advantage in convincing him to make more shrinking machines to help not only them, but Stephanie & Roger and Maria & Veronica, have happiness in their mixed-size arrangements. It's the best! 

I know that this can only lead to happily ever after for all the giantesses ands their tinies! ^^ 

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2021 2:52 AM Title: Hearts Made and Hearts Broken

I apologize for not putting reviews on this story until well after it is finished! I have been very busy. 

 

Right off the bat, I just can't get enough of Veronica's devotion to her new owner, and Maria's playful domination of her pet. I love how she mentions Veronica's family and tells her how vauable she is and then immediately tells her why she is better as her pet. It's so hot, and neither one of them have any problem with it. They both totally accept their new roles in life. 

I also just love Maria's possessiveness of her little toy person when Xue suggests taking her as a replacement for Sophie hehe. 

Poor Chad. I almost feel bad for the guy, but more importantly, I really do hope that Julie finds her happiness. She really does deserve it. ^^ 

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Curvograph Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2021 8:20 PM Title: Needles

A story that deserves a review, but mine will probably be less enthusiastic than the ones dominating the review board.

Frankly speaking, it is an easy read, entertaining at times, but deeply flawed. There are three major issues I see:

1. The narrative - we (as readers) are continuously being told  about characters' virtues, while said virtues are seldom (if at all) shown. It bugged me slightly at the beginning, but became more of an issue as new chapters were being released. I hoped the problem would subside, but it never did. It is most evident in Stephanie (and Amy, to slightly lesser extent): the person we actually meet is oversensitive, bitchy, short-sighted and foolish. Nowhere near the idealised persona she is described to be. In Amy's case, her supposed smarts are never showcased and her attitude of 'everything will be ok, trust Stephanie' displays the lack of imagination we do not associate with smart people. 

2. The characters - this one may be especially subjective, but they are mostly an unlikeable bunch. Chad and Sophie are simple jerks depicted as villains of the story. Both Roger and Brian are slaves to their own fantasies; spineless, weak-willed individuals whose (supposed) smarts are never evident. Julie used to be my favourite, but her actions spoke aginst her. While Sophie is meant to be a villain, the true villains I see are Stephanie and Xue: as opposed to simply being a product of poor upbringing, their disregard for human life and consequences of their actions is truly troubling.

The redeeming factor comes (unexpectedly) in form of Veronica and Maria. Their spontaneous relashionship feels true and unforced - as it should.

3. The sheer number of cliches in one story.

I hope you do not take my criticism as something done out of spite; I just have to address the problems I see. I rate few stories, but some deserve to be reviewed - and I belive you have room for improvement.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your perspective and insights.  
It's clear you put a lot of thought into your analysis.

Interesting take on my story.

I probably should have taken more opportunities to really showcase the virtues of some of my characters.
I got so excited writing about the tiny/giantess playtime that maybe I could have done more to show off certain traits of characters: particularly Amy's smarts - but I consider her true virtues to be of kindness, patience, and loyalty - I think I've demonstrated those traits of Amy consistently in the story.
With that said, maybe I should have created a situation where Amy calls out Stephanie for going too far - but I was into the whole "torture the jerks" mantra that honestly I didn't want anyone to interfere except the occasional protest from Brian.
But maybe giving Amy blind loyalty of Stephanie was a mistake?

The thing I gather though is that you view Sophie and Chad with more sympathy than I do.

Given Sophie's entitled personality and racism - she only cares about herself and no one else, I still would say that Sophie is more villanous than Stephanie or Xue.
Yes, Stephanie is immature and she lets her emotions get the best of her - but her heart is in the right place when it comes to her friends. Her methods are a little extreme - yes.
Xue is more callous and perhaps too playful but she never does anything that would likely cause a tiny to die - to be tortured, yes..but not death. Same with Stephanie.

The only two main characters who really went through the ringer are Sophie and Chad - but our views on these two characters appear to be different.

Brian's brilliance has largely been showcased from the fact that he invented the shrinking machine. He's not the most skilled when it comes to people though. He's also really into Amy.
And while I don't think I explicitly stated it, Roger figured out how to use the shrinking machine without any instruction. 

I have considered rewriting the chapter where Julie used Chad as a dildo.. wanted to create a certain situation for Chad but perhaps making Julie be the one to do it wasn't the best idea.
Stephanie or Xue might have been a better fit for that. I'm just not sure how I would make that fit.

Glad to hear that you like Veronica and Maria's relationship though!  I had the most fun writing about their relationship in particular and I think you explain why that was the case for me.

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2021 3:44 AM Title: Good Morning

Another great chapter! 

Brian and Amy continue to have a relationship which I would die for! ^^ The things that Amy does for Brian are so sweet and hot simultaneously. Brian also gets the best mode of transportation from his girl ;) 

Xue deserves a shrunken pet for her feet. Especially one that she can tease and bully into submission. I am honestly a little upset that Sophie has deprived her of that for the time being. That being said, I hope that absolutely nothing comes of Sophie's little revenge plan. I hope it's really anti-climactic for her. Like, she'll try her best to sneak around with the needles, but then Xue will spot her and be like "Oh! There you are! Naughty pet! Back under my foot now." And then just smacks the needles away and puts Sophie back in her place. I, for one, kind of hope Sophie never returns to normal, and that she is made to fully realize it, too! >:) 

I continue to drool over Maria and Veronica ;) 

They are going to have a great future as owner and pet! I can just tell! 

I love how Veronica just lets Maria put her underfoot and blushes without question as Maria blows her little toy a kiss. It's all she's good for now: making her owner happy! 

 

I can't wait to see how everyone else's morning is going too~ ;) 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Amy is incredibly sweet and she will continue to be sweet with a little teasing here and there with Brian :)

Don't want to spoil much on Sophie but she does have tough competition even though she may not realize it despite EVERYTHING that happened to her.
Sophie is delusional for thinking she can take on Xue, Stephanie etc so easily. 

I honestly didn't start off with the plan of Veronica and Maria being a 'couple' - but it just seemed to work given their personalities and ideal tiny situations. .. and it's honestly a really fun storyline in Nail Salon to write. Continuing their arc in the next chapter.

Next chapter coming up soon!

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2021 2:58 AM Title: Blossoming Relationships

Wow. This chapter. I knew that I was right to be excited about the individual scenes! 

 

First, Brian and Amy's scene of intimacy here was so sweet, and the actual act that they performed together was so erotic and just plain hot. I love them toegether. 

Next, the scene with Chad and Julie genuinely surprised me! I, like Julie, thought that Chad had changed, but it seems like he hasn't. :( Julie is so sweet (and her dominance is honestly so hot)... If I was in Chad's place, I would enjoy doing whatever Julie wanted to do, and I'd wait for her for as long as she wanted! I think that he's honestly missing out on a wonderful girl... 

 

Lastly... Maria and Veronica ^^ 

This section was. So. Hot. 

I loved it!

Veronica finally embraces her new role as Maria teases and seduces it out of her. When Veronica says that Maria just wants her as a tiny slave, she doesn't deny it! Only strokes her and says she can be nice to her. This is most telling when Maria says: 

“'I love that so much, little pet', said Maria, 'keep going and I might reward you.'” 

Maria keeps commanding her, too! Veronica's sexual arousal and relaease is just a reward for her tiny pet. Like giving catnip to a cat~ ;P 

I can't wait for Vernoica to slide even further into pethood as Maria dominates and dehumanizes her even further, all sweetly, like taming a horse and breaking its spirit, making Veronica love being nothing more than her tiny! 

(Speculation: I love how you said that Veronica had the most sexual fun of her life there, after only breaking up with her boyfriend hours ago! Like I said in a previous review, Veronica will realize more and more that she isn't worthy of a person's life: including love and relationships. Maybe this will make her sad sometimes as she looks back on what could have been if she was never shrunk. If that's the case, then who knows? Maybe Maria will let Veronica be with a man again... by sharing her toy with her future boyfriend! ;P That was a lot, lol, but I just had to put it out there!) 

 

As I will always say, this is amazing! 

I can't wait for the next individual pair scenes! And you just know I'm looking for that Xue scene! XD 

Keep up the great work! 

Author's Response:

Brian and Amy make a great couple, they bring out the best in each other!

Chad, he thinks that he can manipulate others into getting what he wants which clearly isn't working so well for Julie now .. but he might eventually turn over a new leaf, to be continued.

I've been having a lot of fun writing about Maria and Veronica. They're both really into the whole dominant/submissive relationship even if Veronica isn't fully ready to admit that just yet!
Haven't written much about Veronica's past but she's spent her life following more dominant personalities.

And interesting ideas about Veronica's future- thinking about the sequel!

Also, already writing the next chapter, Xue is in it ;)

Reviewer: SizePrincess Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2021 2:15 PM Title: Ready for a fun night?

yess!!

I loved Alex's re-appearance, (and again, solidarity with my big sole sister, size 13s!!) 

Putting that asshole Ronald in the place he belongs, below her feet.

Brian again needs to chill, I mean come on dude just have fun.

Veronia I am liking again, she's starting to see the error of her ways, and developing an attraction to Maria. I hope this starts to go beyond physical attraction and the two can develop romantically. 

I am also very excited for the next chapter, it'll be fun! (and I can't wait to see what Stephanie, Xue and the others do to their individual tinies)

I hope Chad gets put through the ringer though XD I still don't like him. 

And hooray for Amy, not only getting some sexy foot play in, but for showing her firmness. 

Author's Response:

Definitely, Alex, your big sole sister, won't take any crap from Ronald! She knows that Ronald has no power over her anymore.

Brian is kind of a nervous nelly but Amy is there to help get him in the right mindset. Amy just wants Brian to enjoy the ride. 

Veronica and Maria - yep their relationship is definitely going to grow, more on them in the next few chapters ;) 

As for Julie and Chad - you'll have to see what happens next chapter.

Stephanie and friends will all find time to shine with their tinies!

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2021 8:13 AM Title: Xue's Choice

I have to admit... when I saw the title of the chapter... I got real excited ^^; 

I love how Xue teased them all with her long and drawn-out choosing process! She's so cute! And I am very interested to see how her and Sophie's night goes~ 

I appreciated that little tiny-to-cheek nuzzle with Stephanie and Roger: always been a fan of those. 

This has all turned out so nicely so far, with each tiny getting paired off with a perfect giantess, and the story can only go up from here! I absolutely cannot wait to see how these coming chapters with individual pairings go! 

Keep up the great work, as always! 

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Xue definitely has a playful side to her! Like mother, like daughter.

The next few chapters will focus on each of the giantess/tiny pairings - each will have its own unique set of adventures ;)

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2021 1:29 PM Title: Truth or Dare

Sophie is just the worst, isn't she? I love that she gets pushed around and smothered by more than one girl's foot in this chapter! ;P 

I can't wait to see, in the end, which tinies (if any) grow back, and which ones (if any) stay as tinies... permanently~ >:) 

 

Stephanie and Roger are basically official now, yay!!! ^^ 

(He almost said "I love you", too! So cute! <3 ) 

 

As for Veronica... I absolutely love where her arc with Maria is headed. 

I really hope that, even though Sophie told her that there's other guys out there, that Veronica will realize that she isn't worthy of them. She'll never have a romantic/sexual relationship, or a career or a life, ever again. 

I hope that Maria breaks Veronica's spirit and makes her sparks of admiration kindle into a flame of devotion. Veronica would realize that all she's good for anymore is being Maria's foot and ass pet. From now on, she's just a toy to be used by another woman, a better woman, a real woman. 

“'Good work, my little pet', said Maria, 'maybe we can sleep together tonight.'” >;) 

 

Lastly, I was so happy to see Amy finally stand up to Sophie and put her foot down! Literally~ ;P 

I really hope that Stephanie can encourage Amy so that she can go through with punishing her herself! 

 

As for what you put in the chapter end notes: Wow! Awesome! 

Really excited to see all that you have planned for this story and these characters! 

(Also, forgot to add in my Chapter 15 review that, even if it's not Roger, I am excited to see who Xue will pick to be her tiny for the night~ ;P ) 

 

And... That concludes my rapid-fire reading and reviewing of this story so far! Lmao 

You are an AMAZING writer, and if this is your first story here, then I am so excited to see what you produce in the future! ^_^ 

Author's Response:

Thank you, I really appreciate all of the great reviews :D I think you'll enjoy the upcoming chapters!

Xue will make her choice on which tiny she wants to sleep with her shortly ;)
Stephanie and Roger are my fave couple in this story but who knows - maybe Xue will have some playtime with Roger or will she have to settle with someone else.

And yep, Sohpie really is the worst - this last chapter was just almost everyone stomping her foot down on Sophie. Even Amy got in the action!

The tinies will all go through some interesting experiences as this story progresses - that's all I say for now!

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08 2021 12:59 PM Title: Nail Salon is Open: Part IV

Great chapter, once again! 

I honestly loved seeing Chad get some satisfaction as a tiny under someone's foot, only for him to get a nasty surprise (from his point of view)!! 

Interesting developments from Maria and Veronica~ I love it! 

"This was such a nightmare but yet at the same time… no no thought Veronica, shut up!" 

I would honestly love it if Maria completely breaks Veronica's spirit and dehumanizes her, turning her into a devoted little pet! ;P 

Love seeing Roger's quickly kindled devotion to Stephanie as well! They're gonna be so good together ^^ 

Looks like Julie's coming next!! >.>