[Report This]Date: January 08 2022 3:06 AM Title: Warm Reception
Overall, this is an amazing story. I especially appreciate how you wrote an actual relationship for Ava and Maggie. This is not just a hot story but a really heartwarming one as well. We actually get to enjoy two lovely characters showing each other real love in more ways than one, and that's a plus from me. As a reader who read this and the next part already, I have to say that you really know how to get readers wanting more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the kind words (and the 5 stars :D)! I was definitely going for heartwarming, so I'm glad I succeeded!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2020 7:33 PM Title: Warm Reception
I love how sweet this story is. The ending felt a bit rash since I wanted to see what else Ava would do to Maggie while she was in her shoe, but overall good story. Hope to see more.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was part of a contest and I didn't want it to go on for too long, but I'm totally up for doing a continuation of this story once I have some free time on my hands :D
Date: December 30 2020 1:37 PM Title: Warm Reception
Hopefully this review counts as (part of) a good response!
Author's Response:
I'd say it does :)
[Report This]Date: December 28 2020 1:57 PM Title: Warm Reception
A sweet little story. Pity it ended so soon; it would've been interesting to hear more about their antics.
Author's Response:
If this gets a good response, I might continue their adventures (especially since they're OCs I've wanted to make for a while)