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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2023 7:35 PM Title: Meanwhile...

I really like this chapter and I think it's very good. I wonder if it could have been even better with a little more backstory on how the guys were convinced to get shrunk down and a little more dialogue. Ever thought about revisiting any of your stories and fluffing them out a bit?

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2011 5:33 PM Title: Meanwhile...

not a big fan of willing vore but I love all of chapter 4. especially the bachorette party. great job suprising the men



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm not much of a fan of willing vore either. Mostly because no matter how much some of us may think we want it, in the end we would fight for our lives if it really happened.

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