Reviewer: timescribe Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

He's called David SMALL, and he "shrank into the lower deck/???" in chapter 1. Great puns,be they intentional or not.

Is there a reason you chose the 1953 setting? To me it combines great elements of film noir imagery in my mind with gts vore.

Ian Fleming was a nice touch too. Casino Royale (his first) came out in 1953.

Roald Dahl couldn't have done better than this.