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Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2011 12:37 PM Title: Meet Nancy

nice start

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 5:40 PM Title: Meet Nancy

Looking forward to more! Sounds like a fun story.

Reviewer: rhino2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2011 5:49 AM Title: Meet Nancy

I really love your story here, great plot and characters.  I am not trying to be mean or anything but there are a few grammatical errors that if you would fix would make the reading easier.  But I really can wait to see whats in store for this guy.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I already told you guys before when i posted this. I don't have spell check so you have to bare with me. Other then that glad you like the story.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 4:56 PM Title: Meet Nancy

great start. hope to see more from this story. like these two characters.

aaron

Reviewer: thestageofrage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2011 3:42 PM Title: Meet Nancy

what a great start and the immortality well you could have a whole loada fun with that :D

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