Reviewer: J - Vader Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2026 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh shit mind control?!!!! And new lore drop holy shit  Batman!!!! lol 

absolutely fantastic move to have balon sneak in and spy and reveal the enemies location!

yune beating the shit out Erika was surprising 

and once again lore drop about the past was a great addition!

overall great story as always 

ps - ….. would it be okay to ask for an odor content in a chapter like bad breath, smelly feet m, burp, farts, and so on just asking if it would be okay to ask 

also there might have been a edit issue because it said ballon in one paragraph when I think it might have been balon you meant just a heads up there

over great work 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. Yes, I really didn't notice the typo.