[Report This]Date: March 24 2026 9:13 PM Title: #15 - Do No Harm
I feel like, or rather hope, that antagonizing fellow psychopaths and killing their tiny friends/morality pets is going to result in Wr8 getting some well deserved comeuppance later on in the story. I genuinely believe Harm would have strangled her to death if nobody had stepped in - she just destroyed his entire character and life. Dunno how she’ll get hers, but she certainly deserves it. Very well written villain, good job.
Author's Response: Thank you! Nice to hear you're engaging the characters like that.
Also thanks for leaving your first comment, I love comments <3
[Report This]Date: March 24 2026 5:44 PM Title: #15 - Do No Harm
I know she already was one, but this chapter definitely solidified her as a villain. So she really can manipulate people! Poor Harm, I can only feel for him. We barely got to know Elena but the whole situation made me fear for her life. You establish characters really well! Thank you for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I tried my best to give Simon and Elena some characterization despite them not being not being in the story for long,
[Report This]Date: March 24 2026 1:31 AM Title: #15 - Do No Harm
The plot thickens! Very pulpy way to get in a little bit of gore as we start to see a bit more of what Wr8 can do, figuratively and literally. It seemed like Caleb barely needed a shove to act out his dark fantasies, so I'm very curious as to what her power actually is. Thanks again for writing it!
Author's Response:
What he got wasn't just a shove, Caleb's entire resolves around control, and he was robbed of it.
Thank you for enjoy the chapter as always!