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Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2026 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 16

Once again balon being the absolute goat once again not only did he speak his shit he gave the two giantess here a reminder of what they stand for and why they are here

yuna I think now need some focus to futher development of her character and place in the story and the training arc with mages seems perfect 

overall great stuff 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. Yes, I have big plans for the sacred valley.

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