[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 10:55 AM Title: #9 - Four Calls
Things are definitely escalating. Poor Elias. The whole stomach section was very hot and written really well! Thank you for the update as always.
Author's Response:
Thank you for checking out, glad you like the stomach part, was so hot writing that.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 10:27 AM Title: #9 - Four Calls
Very fascinating, Robin's playing with fire. It's clear the conflict within her is causing her to waver back and forth between what she knows she should do, and what she strives to be. The 'I can fix her' part of me as well as the part of me that loves happy endings hopes desperately that she'll be able to somehow keep her feelings in check... but at the moment it feels like she's just one catastrophic event from the last threads of her humanity snapping and indulging in her dark desires, and once that happens she really won't be able to stop.
Another lovely chapter, I enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response:
I like that tension too, but can't keep something like that going forever, at some point soon, it's gotta tip into her being safe, or collapse into a massacre. Unless I play the cards up my sleeve carefully.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2026 8:43 AM Title: #9 - Four Calls
An incredibly compelling read. One of the only stories that makes me regularly check in for updates. 10/10.
I'm
definitely rooting for Elias and his friends to make it through this
all in one piece. Perhaps successfully escaping and find sanctuary
elsewhere? Yet another part of me yearns to read about Robin creaming
herself while inflicting unspeakable physical cruelty and torture upon
the already mentally anguished little guy. I'm a little fucked in the
head like Robin because nothing is hotter to me than the complete and
total betrayal of a loving friend or family member by a cruel and
twisted woman living out her sadistic desires. Also the best victims in
this regard are always the most undeserving, like our overly-trusting little friend group here.
Perhaps as a middle
ground we could delve into a few vivid wet dreams of messed up things she'd like
to do to Elias and the others? She's got to be increasingly pent
up and on edge from holding herself back around them, right? Imagine
dealing with such dark urges for years, unhealthily savouring the
memories of her first accidental killing while sating her unfulfilled
fantasies with online fetish media and communities... To then have such a
golden opportunity land in her lap, literally handing itself over to
her. Her frustration must be through the roof from denying herself the urges and
experiences she's craved for years now. Some pretty fucked up
fantasies must be boiling away beneath the surface, the pressure
steadily mounting...
Author's Response:
It's really nice to see you post a review here too <3
Yes, the idea of betrayal and the least deserving victim making it the hottest is something I fully get. I originally started this story from my own POV as someone often imagining themselves in the power role, in that way Robin became a sort of self-insert of how I would handle being as I am if others were really in my hands.
I'll see what I can do in terms of dream or fantasy scenarios, but right now I think I have a few world building and plot points I wanna hit in the next few chapters.