Hmmm interesting lore reveal about aurora and her powers and curse. 

Yuna was great as always I’m sure we’ll get a deep dive into her character and lore before she arrived here

the king was very good as well and honestly had valid points and reasoning behind his actions. Loved the embrace with him and his daughter.

Oh Ruby ….. what is there to say besides she’s pure evil and sexy while doing it! I know she’ll probably do even more crazy and cruel things later on.

i also loved the tease for the next chapter especially when it’s done right! Nice work there without spoiling anything.

further more - loved the vore, feet, and cruelty smut here. Can’t wait to see what else you do in this story.

overall great work 

ps - I suggest the fight with the three should be similar to invincible vs Omni man or conquest fights in my opinion it would be so dope and show the stakes are high