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Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2026 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow okay I like were this is going so far this princess definitely reminds me of a character from an anime but I can’t remember who exactly 

yune is a fun character definitely plays into the innocent, but very powerful archetype of a MC 

the side characters are very interesting and The plot is getting better and better every chapter 

Things that can improve I’ll say the dialogue could be a little bit more tighter but has improved and Yune could maybe not mention she’s an ordinary girl multiple times it can get a little repetitive.

but overall pretty good stuff here and very interested to see where everything goes next



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