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Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2026 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hmmmm very interesting concept the dialogue could be a little bit better and a little bit more sharper, but overall pretty consistent storytelling and I’ll also say the size description can be inconsistent at few times but still pretty good 

overall nice work



Author's Response:

Thank you for your feedback. I will take your suggestions into account.

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