[Report This]Date: April 28 2026 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Discovery and Admissions
Hey! I am really loving this story and hope you come back to it! Would love to see what you have in mind for the daring little guy!
[Report This]Date: April 28 2026 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Discovery and Admissions
Hey! I am really loving this story and hope you come back to it! Would love to see what you have in mind for the daring little guy!
Date: March 04 2026 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Discovery and Admissions
Will this return soon?
[Report This]Date: September 13 2025 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Discovery and Admissions
Glad to see you back! This chapter was great :D. 36k words is another giant one for sure haha; was happy when I saw that. If the story had died at the last chapter, it would have actually been a pretty in-theme ending, but it's better to see it continue. :)
It's funny how he keeps getting into situations that are dangerous and have him panicking, then the moment he gets out of them he's like, 'Hey, that wasn't so bad. Wanna try that again?'. Steve has a one-track mind and I respect that.
Entrapment scene was great, the way you made it happen was actually pretty similar to what I was thinking when I recommended the idea. Definitely happy with how it turned out, thanks for writing it! :D
If you want a more vore-related suggestion, having him land in, and get lost in, some shared dish during their date, and having Emma internally panicking as she tries to find him with a spoon/fork and sneakily get him out, while an unaware Becky is just happily enjoying the shared meal would be fun. Emma trying to figure out if he's in every bite before she chews would add some extra time, which means Becky has a higher chance of getting him, so she has to pick up the pace, increasing the chance for accidents. Could also have it be something with some crunch to it, to mess with her some more. Though at this point, I think I am being mean to your characters haha.
Though, feel free to ignore that idea if you don't think it will fit into the story, I don't want to be the cause of any more delays lol.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! I worked in the panty entrapment stuff specifically per your request.
And yeah, it's quite unrealistic that he keeps having near death experiences, dusts himself off and is like "well, let's not say NEVER again just yet..."
But then again, none of this is realistic. And, though it is hopefully interwoven with an enjoyable story, let's keep in mind the ultimate goal here. We all know what this site is for lol. So yeah, whatever story device keeps the smut train running.
Date: September 12 2025 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Discovery and Admissions
Another amazing chapter! Thank you for the call out!
I knew it was going to be another masterpiece of a chapter with that flashback, "you know im going to eat you alive, right?" Absolutely beautiful.
Loved where you took Emma, giving her more depth and putting her in morally grey situations was a great choice.
Really looking forward to the next chapter and eventually finding out who is driving the Cadillac
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review as always, hope you enjoyed the bra shopping!
Yeah, I was super on the fence about the Emma thing. It's part of why I kept revising this chapter over and over. It just didn't seem like something she would do, and my concern was that I was forcing a square peg into a round hole to accommodate a request.
But I went back and tinkered with the build-up to it. Amy sitting on her husband and saying he loves that stuff and it kind of feels good, the compliments even before they left the house, the pending evening of losing her virginity, etc.
With all the foreshadowing, I decided it made perfect sense for her to end up making a morally questionable call. She's still just a teenager, after all.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2025 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Discovery and Admissions
Welcome back! Nice work as always! Yo considering more inside rectum action at some point going forward? Like inside Emma or Becky as they’re doing it?
Author's Response:
So, that's actually my favorite subgenre. It will definitely show up again. I wasn't planning on it with those two but maybe I can find an organic way to work it in. I can think of one instance in the story that's already planned out where it is absolutely happening.
Thanks for the review!