Reviewer: Silverhawk13223 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2025 12:36 PM Title: Sunday Breakfast

I don’t know about how I feel about this story, comes off kinda lack luster in the plot. Then there’s the fact he just let himself be swallowed instead of trying to indicate he was in her mouth, then just sitting in her stomach not doing anything afterwards. Let’s also take into account that you would die within that short amount of time plus there isn’t very much air in there, especially after she burped.

Reviewer: JstARdr Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2025 12:05 AM Title: Sunday Breakfast

So glad to see another chapter! Your unaware vore action never gets old, though it’s definitely one of the most unorthodox endings to the action. Sad to hear this one’s almost over, but it was a good one.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I tried to switch it up a bit with the ending, do something I typically haven't done before to break to same ol' same ol' similar ending I've done in the past before with these situations. 

I wish I had it in me more to really put out 10-15 chapter stories like I used to, I just don't have the drive as much as I once did which is part of the reason chapters have been coming out slower this time around. I'm glad to hear you enjoy it though, I try not to let the quality diminish even if I don't feel like hunkering down and writing another chapter.