Reviewer: K4naan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2025 3:17 AM Title: Waterworks

Really compelling story so far!  I also really like how you described the dirty clothes in her backpack.  Autumn seems like a very complex character and there was a wide range of emotion in this chapter.  Very looking forward to what happens next!  

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and yeah, she's somewhat your typical college freshman girl. I keep that in mind when writing her a lot.