First off I am glad to see you return to writing.  I have greatly missed this story and very much want to see where it goes. 

Now then with this chapter you have cemented my thoughts about donnica, Annebel, and Trevor, and that they are all coocoo.

Trevor knows, knows just what kind of person Donnica is, but he is willing to give up all of his rights for her, well they say lover makes fools of us all. But this, is a lot. 

Then there thsi crazy Annebel and her fetish to call donica mommy and trevor brother. She is really cracked. And donnica and really cracked to. I get that she would be ecstatic in Trevor willing giving up his freedom to her, but that she loves Annebels fawning to is weird. 

How is is that Amber and Rachel feel like a far more stable and honest relationship than the supposed adults. And thats saying something considering how their relationship is developing, which to be honest I love. I am probably being a hypocrit when I say I am ok with Amber and Rachels relationship and have problems withj Trevor and Donnica and Annebel. But yea I find Amber and Rachel far more sane. Also I do hope one day that Rachel will have a proper place for a bed and not hidden like some dirty secret.

I am interested to see where the story line with victoria will go. I am also interested in seeing where the this with Scarlett goes. And will poor Rachel have to please to giant mistress. Poor gal.

One thought kept running through my head as I read through S3:

Helena really is pathetic, isn't she?

The more we learned about her history with her unnamed rival, the more I felt this way about her. So Helena spent her whole life going against this person, losing every single time, and now she's basking in her "victory" that came only because the virus and the law destroyed her? That's really pathetic.

It gets worse. Since the law stripped the rival of all her possessions, Helena, the stalker that she is, bought up all her shit, including the rival's ancestral home, just to take it away from her. She couldn't take anything away from the rival in a fair fight, so she waited until something else beat the rival then claimed all her shit like she had won. That's extremely pathetic.

Oh wait, there's more! Helena had to have the tiny rival herself! She needed to own her superior, make the her tiny better her slave. Because Helena could never defeat the rival, she needs to make the rival suffer, humiliate her in a nightly ritual in a vain effort to make herself feel above the rival. Pa-the-tic!

Not only that, but the only way she can get the rival to worship her feet is to threaten the rival's sister. The rival is so strong that, even as a tiny, she has the strength of will to resist the giantess's orders, only complying to spare her sister a worse fate. So Helena can't even dominate this woman properly when she's only an inch tall. Fucking pathetic!

Finally, even after abusing this woman under her feet, making the stench of her feet seep into the rival's very bones, she still can't get the rival to call her "accept her rule." And this bothers Helena, because she knows, deep down, that despite all the advantages life has thrown her way in this rivalry, she still hasn't truly won. That may be the most pathetic thing of all!

I really like the rival, though! I hope we see a lot more of her in the chapters ahead and even see her find a way to improve her (and her sister's (situation) a bit. Also, I wonder if the rival felt as passionate about their rivalry as Helena did. It would be hilarious if it came out that the rival didn't even know they were competing! I doubt that, though, although I do think the way her backstory was set up that we likely haven't seen the last of this tiny badass!

I will say that, despite how pathetic I found Helena as the segment went on, you, as usual, sold her divinity incredibly well at the start of the segment. The way she made the cage tremble atop the table with her steps walking into the room? Fucking hot!

I'm also in awe of your ability to right foot scenes so radically differently. This isn't the first time you've written a brutal perspective on foot play, but it's still amazing to me how differently you can portray Trevor being in total bliss at Donnica's feet and still so thoroughly portray the agony of the rival in this scene. The diversity with which you write these scenes is really impressive!

It's odd: I don't recall Helena being Donnica's partner in building up the firm (not in the sense that she seemed to use it here, anyway; I'm sure Helena is at least a senior partner at the firm, but that's not what I interpreted Helena to be referring to here). Yeah, Donnica, based on what she said when Trevor first wanted Helena fired, thinks that she is valuable to the firm. But if Trevor thinks they can do without her, she's not vital.

Not only that, but it's interesting how Helena worded things in the narrative. Donnica was her partner. She needed Donnica by her side. Donnica was holding her back, becoming a problem. You'd think this was Helena's firm from the way she puts things. So Helena is pathetic and entitled. Got it. Must be that old money mentality, being from a powerful family and all.

Of course, Helena greatly underestimates Donnica's feelings for Trevor, even after being shut out of Donnica's good graces for even accidentally "making use" of Trevor and putting him in danger. Helena is too set in her ways to see what's right in front of her face: that Donnica is truly, deeply, and madly in love with Trevor. So she can't bring herself to understand that "removing the root" of the problem is only going to make things so much worse for her. If she tries to do something to Trevor, Donnica will destroy her (assuming Annabel doesn't claw her eyes out first). And if Helena actually succeeds? God help her!

It's funny, though. I always assumed Helena would take Donnica's relationship with Trevor as a sign of weakness and just try to take over the firm, as Donnica did before her. She may still try that at some point, but I was a little surprised to hear her imply that getting rid of Trevor would solve all her problems.

Anyway, it was really interesting to get a deeper look into Helena and meet a new character along the way, too! Maybe next time we'll even get a name for her!

1. Scarlett coming in to challenge Amber can only be a good thing as iron sharpens iron as they say. Will it lead to her improving her game to get on Scarlett's level only time will tell but if anyone is determined enough to do it it would be Amber.

2. Becca really is a good soul who got a bad lot in life but she seems to be rubbing off on Amber little by little as we go. Thus I fully expect her to eventually break through and help Naomi when the time comes for it.

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3. Shocked to see Trevor so willingly surrender his quest for staying somewhat independent from Dominica. I understand Becca breaking a little but she still to have her morals and compass. Curious to see where this goes for the whole tinies rights movement with the recent events.

4. Anna seems to have slipped into her new role ever better than her old one. Who knew after all the tinies she brutally trained that all she wanted was to be in their place even if she was ten times their size.

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5. Holy fuck that was one of the most incredibly hot things I've ever read here!

6. The sheer power, humiliation and pettiness Helena used to degrade her at her feet was just a chefs kiss. Making her suffer at the smell in the cage even before the moment was truly incredible.

7. I do hope to learn more about the sister in future chapters and how she came to be in Helena's capture alongside her sister.

8. With Anna firmly under Domica's control and Naomi seemingly moving towards a possible friendship/mutal respect with Amber it seems we have found our next big bad to challenge the utmost divine rule of Dominica. 

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9. Wow a brave play by Becca but it seems to have worked out and strengthened their relationship as a whole.

10. With this revelation in Becca/Amber relationship and what Naomi is going through it truly seems the overbearing weights upon both of them is their mothers domineering stature and command over everything they seem to behold.

11. It is nice to see Becca still has her passion for helping others even with her willingness to mostly obey Amber without question.

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12. The jury is still out on Naomi but it is wonderful to see Amber getting what looks like a true genuine friend in Scarlett. It seems both girls can really use one at this juncture in their lives.

13. Given their seemingly shared appreciation of each others looks and the sudden realization of their shared affliction it makes me wonder if we will see poor Becca more overwhelmed by tootsies than she ever thought possible.

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I'm glad to see you are in a good place and hope it continues to get better for you.

It's great to see you back at it! I've missed that hypnotic writing style of yours, and man, I was hanging on damn-near every word I've read so far.

I just finished the first segment, and it looks like you came out swinging here! There's so much shit happening in the background of this one, and the actual meat of the matter is incredibly interesting as well!

My first thought as I read the segment was that it reminded me a lot of when Annabel had her big life-altering revelation after Trevor talked to her about empathy. Annabel was appalled by this at first (and actually wanted to crush Trevor for suggesting that she empathize with the dude who ghosted her), but once it hit her, she saw everything in a new light (well, except for tinies not named Trevor, anyway).

That's the very same lesson Rebecca is trying to teach Amber here, even if, unlike Trevor, she doesn't realize it. With both Scarlet and Naomi, Rebecca's life experiences helped her see that there was more to things than Amber and her knew and that it's important to understand why people do the things they do, even the mean, sometimes evil things.

Yeah, at first glance, Scarlett is just some conniving bitch out to steal Amber's spot, but what exactly is motivating her to come in and immediately make an enemy like that, especially when it's costing her any chance she has at making any friends. That's a big sacrifice to make, being miserable socially in order to thrive athletically, although Rebecca's observation that Scarlett could at least play at the collegiate level makes a lot of sense in this context. There's probably more to it than just that, but I could easily see Scarlett thinking that a little time as a pariah in a new school is well worth securing her future at a good college, both for athletic and academic reasons.

And you know I've been banging the drum for Naomi pretty much from the start. Yeah, she's done some fucked up things and almost killed both of our beloved main tinies in the same night, but she's also clearly the victim of abuse (and who knows how long that's been going on). That can seriously fuck with people, especially if it starts at a young age. We already know that the reason she wants to be a tiny-crushing goddess is because the only "positive" influence left in her life after being taken from her father (another traumatizing event, surely) is that Youtuber goth lady who routinely does it for views, speaking that same nonsense that Naomi was that night.

It makes total sense that Rebecca can see the signs of abuse from Naomi (they're a lot more visible than Amber's are) and that Rebecca would want to help Naomi, even though Naomi not only almost stepped on her like a bug but made clear that she would do much worse now if given the chance (that whole "limb from limb" thing she talked about, all in that dark-toned whisper was fucking chilling!).

Speaking of Naomi's abuse, I'm absolutely ecstatic that you're exploring that further! This was something I was really hoping you'd follow up on at some point, and it looks like we're going to dig much deeper into that in the coming chapters (or even coming segments; reviewing like this is kind of fun, not knowing what's coming in the paragraphs ahead!)

And holy fuck did you do an awesome job of making that abuse tangible here! That empty presence Naomi had up until she realized that Rebecca was in the room with them (also being clever enough to realize that the reason Amber put herself between Naomi herself and the desk was because Rebecca was hiding there) was unsettling but also depressing, knowing why she is the way she is. And the way she crumpled when Amber went to hit her was fucking perfect, as was how long she stayed that way, not moving long after Amber put her fist down. Victoria forcing her to thank Donnica for a compliment and for a job she absolutely didn't want completed the package!

Back to the perspective and empathy thing, I was intrigued by Amber's reaction to all this. She picked up on the signs almost as much as Rebecca did. She knew something was wrong with the way Victoria was talking to Naomi. She knew Naomi wanted no part of that job. She knew that Naomi's obedience was being forced into obedience. All the pieces were there for Amber to figure out what was happening.

But something prevented her from caring.

And that also caught my attention. Amber was so against even considering helping Naomi, even though Rebecca, the one who almost died, was fighting for Naomi. That struck me as a bit odd, although I guess maybe it shouldn't have with Amber's possessive nature? I struggled to understand why Amber so emphatically be against Rebecca's desire to give Naomi some help (I totally get why Amber didn't care at first; it's easy to hate someone for their actions without thinking about the reasons behind them, especially when a loved one is involved). But this line near the end of the segment really spoke to me:

Amber just stared at her, utterly dumbfounded, the sheer absurdity of Rebecca’s words making her head spin. How could she say this? How could she even consider this after everything Naomi had done? Had Rebecca forgotten everything that happened on Azurea Isle? Had she forgotten just how close Amber had come to losing her?

Not how close Naomi had been to taking Rebecca away from her, but how close Amber had come to losing her. I feel like there's something there beyond simple possessiveness. Maybe guilt? The way Amber emphasized herself here seems to imply responsibility rather than selfishness, at least to me. Does Amber blame herself for what happened? And, if so, is she channeling that guilt into hate toward Naomi, since she's the one who actually tried to do the deed? I don't know, but it would explain a lot if this were the case. I don't think there's enough there to say for sure, though.

And, of course, the segment rounded back to the major theme of Amber and Rebecca's arc: the master-slave dynamic that's growing between them. I thought it was really sweet how worried Amber was about Rebecca after Naomi left, as well as how Amber didn't take advantage of her authority and force Rebecca to open up. She let Rebecca have her space and tried to comfort her, which was an awesome expression of Amber's love, given how easily Amber could have demanded that Rebecca just spit it out (and Rebecca would have obeyed, if the end of the segment is any indication).

Hell, even when Amber forced the issue, it was through reassurance rather than order. I really like that Amber is taking her master role with Rebecca seriously, not just using it to get whatever she wants out of Rebecca. Despite a part of her viewing Rebecca as lesser because of her size, the real her (yeah, I'm still calling it that!) still respects Rebecca as a person, which is very encouraging to see!

But Amber does use her authority to get out of uncomfortable conversations, which I still think will come back to bite her at some point. The way Amber shut down Rebecca's concerns had to be really disheartening to Rebecca. Having been the victim of abuse herself, Rebecca naturally feels like she has to help now that she sees the signs in Naomi. Amber shutting her down like that is surely going to negatively affect Rebecca's psyche. Maybe Rebecca will lose more of herself or maybe this is an issue strong enough that Rebecca will fight more aggressively than she has lately and Amber might do something that she'll regret. Either way, it should be fun to keep an eye on this as it develops.

But back to the theme of obedience, I found it interesting to compare Amber's brand of it to Naomi's. Victoria now seems to have total control over Naomi, which, to me, implies that Victoria did something truly horrible to her after they got back from the island. That would make sense, since Victoria doesn't give a shit about her daughter but clearly cares about the status that comes with being Donnica's friend. Fuck Victoria, by the way!

But Amber's obedience was different. She was defiant to a point, pushing boundaries a bit with her own mother. But Amber knew there was a point where she had to stop pushing. I don't know what those consequences are that she's so worried about, but she just can't get past that point with her mom, even when Donnica is doing something unreasonable like forcing her to hang out with a mortal enemy just so Donnica herself can make nice with said enemy's mother. Donnica is kind of treating Amber like a prop here (even if she doesn't think about it that way), which is pretty fucked up in its own right.

But that whole exchange made me think back to that scene on the beach between Rebecca and Amber, as well as how much Rebecca's taunts that Amber would be going to the island for the rest of her life and end up married to the son of one of her mom's friends bothered Amber. Amber doesn't want the life her mom has laid out for her. She wants the freedom to choose, and she's strong-willed enough that she'd probably find success in almost anything she'd do. But the weight of her mother's judgment is too heavy for her to lift off herself. I mean, again, what consequences are so worrying to Amber if she defied her mom more? Honestly, I think she's most afraid of Donnica being disappointed in her, of hating her for not fitting into Donnica's perfect world. As far as I can tell, that's the only thing Donnica could take away that Amber would really care about (only because Donnica doesn't know Rebecca is living there too): her love.

This is especially sad because we know Donnica doesn't feel this way. Yeah, she'd be upset if Amber didn't follow what she had planned for Amber's life, but Amber is more important to Donnica than that. The few times we've gotten a deeper look into Donnica's thoughts on Amber prove that. It's this whole goddess complex thing that's muddying the waters here. Donnica just expects the world to bend to her will, but she doesn't consider how doing this affects the people she cares about most.

And I did enjoy that brief deeper look into Donnica in this segment. I love how she regrets hitting Naomi, even though she knows Naomi deserved it. That Donnica  was "disciplined" that way as a child explains a lot about her, too. Her parents were distant and abusive, so Donnica's idea of "strength" is really twisted, which sucks (although I can't say I'm not enjoying it at the same time! Does that make me a bad person?).

But yeah, it was nice to see that Donnica's offer to help Naomi was a sincere one and not just some power play over Victoria. Donnica officially cares more about Victoria's daughter than Victoria herself does. Did I mention fuck Victoria?!

Oh, and I know it's a bit late to say this, but it was great to see Victoria and Naomi back! This was a great time to bring them in, and I can see a lot of storytelling potential in these two. Things could go a lot of ways with them. Naomi working at an office filled with tiny-haters could be interesting, and I'm very curious how she'll interact with Trevor there (assuming Trevor is still office manager, of course; I'm not sure what the long-term fallout of the "Helena Incident" was). And as much as I hate Victoria, she's also sexy as fuck to me, so storytelling potential? But seriously, I hope that bitch gets what's coming to her at some point (even though I love the fact that, given how you've told this story so far, that's far from a given; it'll make it that much sweeter if it happens!).

Fucking awesome start to this one! It'll take some time, but I'm going to go through this segment-by-segment. I'm curious if you've got as much stuff going on in the others as you do in this first one!

Hey bro, i'm so happy to be able to post a review on a new chapter. What can i say about except it's perfect. The third segment as a foot lover is of course my favorite, but the other are incredible too. The work on the emotions part are fantastic you can really feel how hard it is for the different character. And the bonus is all the little talk about soccer my favorite sport. Thanks for this amazing chapter 

Author's Response:

Yes I knew you would love the foot part :D

I was thinking about you (and all the other foot guys!) when I wrote it, I hadn’t had a good foot scene in a few chapters so this got a lot of attention. Not only did it have lots of foot erotica, but it began to introduce readers to Helena’s world. I hope you are interested in visiting it ;)

…and yes I’m glad you enjoy the soccer part. Me and you have followed so much soccer this year that maybe it start to show in my writing lol

Thanks for the review bro :)