




Date: May 22 2025 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part II)
Definitely didn’t disappoint with part 2. Just under 29k words! The POV change was great, enjoyed seeing how it played out from both sides.
Looking forward to the morning after, hope the alcohol and hangover doesn’t leave her too forgetful of the previous fun ;) she might be liable to forget about something while in a rush to get to work. Especially if he’s not moving around much, could be mistaken as something more mundane.
Feel like their relationship will be a ‘little’ strained after he gets out of his current predicament, alcohol can only be blamed so much lol. Would like to Emma make a reappearance, she’s probably the kindest of the cast (at-least, Steve might think so, after this chapter), so she’d be his best bet for getting away from Amy for a day or two without as much danger.
She’d get the opportunity to cheer him up, earn some points with him… and also push some boundaries with her one-sided crush. Would love to see some accidental/reluctant panty entrapment, that’s probably my favorite, especially if the pleasure/thrill of it makes them not remove the tiny at the first opportunity… or the second, to their guilt.
Anyway, thanks for the chapter! You definitely cooked with this one, definitely my favorite in the story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!! Funny you mention that. We're about to get back to Emma since we've had a break for a few chapters. She's got some stuff to figure out with Ashley, Becky, graduation, a prudish "traditional family values" mom...
That scenario sounds great. Definitely something I'd be into exploring.
Date: May 22 2025 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Solicitation (Part II)
Loved it! And in regards to your response to my last review, youve basically hinted that anything I might have requested is already on its way! You keep knocking it out of the park and then hinting even better stuff is on the way.
But I am looking forward to the return of Emma, Im a boob guy, and I am hoping she continues to outgrow her bras!
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for the review. Yup, hard at work on prior requests...