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Reviewer: darkone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2025 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 17

Not to nitpick (I'm loving this story!!!)

Chapter 17 had some paragraphs that are repeated. Not sure if you want to remove them. (It's in the section with the ice cream bar).

Keep going, it's great!



Author's Response:

Sorry about that.  I have removed the redundant paragraphs.

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