[Report This]Date: April 01 2025 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Brief Respite
What else can I say other than... this is peak! Seriously, this chapter was even better than the last one! Something I always wondered about was Reika's slaves and whatever was their deal in the last story. I'm glad they're being developed here, and what a development it is! It's better than anything I could have asked for!
I love Kaoru and I'm sure Jin and him will become good friends. I love Aika as well! She's so adorable and I hope Jin and her can develop a nice friendship too. And poor Toma! Though I fear for his life in the coming chapters... but who knows, haha!
The onsen scene was beautiful. Every scene with Reika here was amazing, but that one definitely takes the cake. Also, Jin, you idiot! You ruined it!
I love their relationship, but everything must feel so overwhelming for poor Jin. She's his friend, but she's a goddess, she's gentle but she's teasing and dominant and cruel, everyone says he's a toy, she even said he was more of a passing interest, though I think that's more her trying to convince herself of it. Now that Jin appeared, she doesn't want to ruin who she became with who she once was. But go, Jin, fight that good fight! Realize you love her and bring her back! Boy's selfless, but too shy lol
But yeah, everything must be more than overwhelming to the poor man. So many confusing thoughts and signals must be running through his head. We're cheering for you, Jin!
This remake is splendid and I can't wait for what more you have prepared.
As always, thank you for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes, all secondary characters are going to be much more prominent in this story since we are going for an epic fantasy feel.
We will also be exploring the land of the demon realm. Reika's Kokuyo (Black Radiance), Kaida's Goen (Crimson Calamity), Mayume's Mukui (Dream-Eater).
It's honestly insanely fun for me to write Reika as well, especially the Reika with almost no restraint at the beginning of the story (she's even more unhinged in the next chapter). But yeah as the story goes on, characters need to grow yada yada, reika would become less fun. So it's a good thing we have other queens that can do exactly that ;)
As always, thanks for the support!