Date: March 30 2025 8:58 PM Title: Video killes the radio stars
Another good chapter.
I particularly enjoyed the interaction between Ashley and Julia. Their conversation felt genuine, as though they were truly treating each other as equals. The growth in Julia's character compared to the earlier chapters is quite noticeable.
I also really liked the plan for Ashley's second egg. However, one thing that the characters (and maybe you) have not considered is that since Ashley and Barbara will be the biological parents, the child would come out white, which would be a good indication that it's not julias biological child. One mistake I think you made is that in the moment when they are all hugging each other, Julia only addresses Samantha and not Isley, despite her also being there.
I would also have liked to see a bit more detail of the "Fun stuff" at the end. I understand the way you made it, although I am hoping you don't skip too many details in future Chapters.
I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
The last two chapters will focus on the second egg and what'll happen to it and how the three Parker wives will settle in their new lives ! I hope you'll like that :)