Date: March 23 2025 11:56 AM Title: Larger family
I have noticed the characters often use the word "goddess." Mostly, it seems be used in the same context as the word "god" in real life. However, I have also noticed instances where seems as if they are actually talking about a real goddess. So, is it just a saying, or is there actually a goddess?
This chapter maintains the high quality seen throughout the story, and I really enjoyed it.
p.s. I have read your "Soulmate of the Godling" story on SizeFiction, and I believe it has the potential to be a really good story. I really liked the first 3 chapters.
Author's Response:
So, basically when Futanaris became the dominant "gender"/breed of Humans on the planet because of the Futanari Pandemic, a prophetess rose that claimed that they were made in the true image of the Creator, that she was a Futanari Goddess finally feeling that Her children needed to be closer to Her self. Hence the apparition of futas.
So the Church of the Goddess became the dominant Religion, at least in Europe and the Americas. Hence why there is a Goddess and the "Goddess" talk from the main characters.
After several centuries, the use of "Goddess" instead of "God" as in "Oh my God!" has become ubiquitous, basically !
Thanks for the review by the way ! Also, if it's not done, don't hesitate to review on Size Fiction also ! It helps a lot :)
Date: March 20 2025 4:35 PM Title: Larger family
Meant as a bit of an answer:
Well, the doctor basically told her she didn't expect her to make it out of this and with this also basically admitted that she'd have allowed Ashley to "not come out of this unscathed". Julia freaked out for less before. Yet now she's instead making out with the one who was putting her life at risk for following the law that almost got Ashley killed. Don't think of Julia to be the kind who goes "Well, rules are rules, sucks for Ashley, we're gonna have sex anyway.".
Yet the bigger issue is that she doesn't show the slightest bit of love for her daughter. She was just born and is barely even acknowledged to exist by Julia. Nor did Julia ever seem to care about the increasing discrimination against mixed breeds. In general, she seems to be an awful mother, who doesn't care about her children or what life they are going to lead.
It's also a bit of a disappointing trend how the past chapters Ashley went down from absolutely anything she wanted. She has a request, it's denied, she forgets after sexy time. (Don't mean the sexy time things, I mean the important family decisions.) By now she has barely any agenda as a person and only gets along with anything that was said. Also, she's a bit too accepting to get back to just owned and slave, considering Julia is supposed to treat her as an equal member of the family.
Doesn't quite matter if she's a sub, at least they should really distinguish between sexy times and general family life. Make it a thing of consent to change the setting. Whenever Julia reduces her to just a slave without a say in whatever they're doing, it's basically a full revert to the start, as if nothing changed. Since her reawakening, it even seems like Julia loves her a lot less.
Regarding the egg, it was already elaborated how Futas of Julia's size tend to do self-insemination. So that would be a logical next step.
The egg solution would be quite simple, yet maybe a bit crass:
Insert egg, cover Ashley in cum, wait till it dries, repeat till she's basically a white blob, insert her, and I'm sure Barbara would help "push" her past the cervix.
Retrieving her could be difficult (also, maybe air, but that can be left to fantasy).
Julia could even claim that it was basically self-insemination, so the daughter would be considered just hers and might pose to be a loophole for her to legally own Ashley as the one with the strongest claim, as an absolute direct descendant.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delay in answer !
As I said, Julia didn't learn about how bad the situation was until the Doctor herself told her - and of course, Dr. Nelson didn't dare tell her "by the way, your tiny wife? I hate her guts and really did very little if not nothing to help her". She doesn't want to die, and she knows from personnal experience via her daughter that Julia can just kill her easily - and has little capacities to resist it.
Regarding Julia, Ashley and the family dynamics, you have to remember that the former is very much limited in what she can do to express her love for others, even her children. But she tries, as best she could, as you'll see. Ashley herself is still reeling from several events that have thrown her life in disarray far more than whatever she had ever dreaded. But, and that's important, she's trying to get back a sense of normalcy in all of that, and sadly, that normalcy is more what she had with Julia before the coma, a short period where while progress had been made by Julia, Ashley herself was still very much struggling. But next chapter will be dealing with Ashley trying to get some semblance of control and social position within the family.
Regarding the egg solution, you'll see what will be proposed and how it'll play out in the next few chapters !
Date: March 19 2025 2:55 PM Title: Larger family
Well, if this chapter wasn't a new low for Julia, in an already pretty deep abyss.
Her wife almost died, her child just born, first act: "I'm gonna leave the room to fuck around with the woman who almost got you killed."
Especially, the part that she apparently doesn't feel anything for her daughter aside from a sort of accomplishment over her pretty much broken "get-along-with-everything-wife", she doesn't seem to particularly care about it.
Neither did anyone seem to mind here anymore that the increasingly sprawling discrimination threatens tinies and even Ashley to an ever greater degree. As I said, big low for Julia, after proclaiming she'd care about Ashley.
Ashley sometimes seems too little of a person with a will, the way she goes right away again along with any sexual antics, despite having almost died, her relationship with Julia should certainly become more equal instead of always taking the role of the slave (Julia was at times pretty much dependent on her approval).
Strange that Julia didn't take the obvious solution of implanting the last egg into herself. I thought it was going that way.
Author's Response:
Ouch !
And here I was, believing that I had done a great job showing Julia's progresses as an individual, trying to challenge herself and all ! I guess I really failed to convey that she didn't know how badly the birth had gone at first, I'll try to explain it next chapter I guess !
Regarding Ashley, we have to remember that she likes being dominated and she has a deep craving to be an important member of the family and she can't see - yet - another way than being truly a part of their sexy times. It is however not her sole role, the last few chapters will see her expend in a new direction, inspired by something Julia wanted in a previous chapter... but taken to a totally different way.
Regarding the egg solution... I simply never even thought about it, so I'll definitely adress it !
As always, thanks a lot for the review !