Date: March 05 2025 5:05 PM Title: Cockvored
Another great chapter.
One thing that has surprised me is the lack of discussion about Julia and possibly Barbara needing to take additional lovers. Barbara might be fine with just Ashlyn considering she is older and submissive, but Julia would definitely need to take lovers given the vastness of the limbo for a futa.
I am curious about Ashley's pregnancy While it could be completely normal, the emphasis on how large her baby seems to be makes me wonder if she could be carrying twins.
I also have two ideas that I'm not sure I want to happen, but I will share them here. The first is that the hospital made a mistake, and the baby is not actually Julia's.(it's a girl) The second idea is a continuation of the first, where the hospital and/or Julia takes the baby away from Ashlyn.
Which would almost certainly be enough to push Ashlynn to be suicidal.
I would not like to see the second idea come to fruition. I just wanted to share it.
Looking forward to the next chapter, i'm really excited to find out how the wedding will go.
Author's Response:
I hadn't even thought about additonal lovers. I guess I'll have to add that in the future chapters, as the story decided to be expanded somehow ! Damn it !
Remember that Ashley is really small, barely 1m42. Even a normal sized baby is big for her. And Isley ? Well, we'll see soon enough what's the situation is about her, I'm not spoiling anything !
Regarding what may happen with the delivery of the baby and all, I won't say, as I don't want to spoil, sorry, but stay tuned, and remember, I struggle to write cruel stuff ! I really do !
Thanks for the review, it helps a lot :) !
Date: March 04 2025 8:24 PM Title: Cockvored
What still grates me quite severely is that nobody seems to care what happens to the future half-siblings of Isley. As of now, they are going to be trained in a facility to be distributed as good little pets to willing owners. Probably so brainwashed that they'll be little different from actual animals.
One would think Ashley or even Julia would mind the fate of the little mini Ashleys. Yet they didn't even talk about them.
Author's Response:
The thing is that neither of them can do anything and :
The whole event is too much for Ashley to really comprehend. She's basically lost her reproductive freedom and doesn't want to deal with it because it's not something she ever considered and with her own traumas, she believes it's better left untouched.
Julia is seething but those are out of her hands and she doesn't really care about the tiny siblings of Isley eiher, beyond the fact that she believes all should have been hers.
And Barbara is happy that more tinies will be born but not really that Ashley was robbed of something, so she is conflicted about it and decided to basically not touch the whole deal. Better not to poke a still sore wound, basically.
Also, it hasn't came to my mind to use it in the story, but I guess it may happen now. Congratulations, you may have increaed the length of the story beyond what Inhad in mind xD !