Reviewer: GTS ElfGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2025 12:30 PM Title: Planning the future

I have to say, this story is very good, I love the characters, Ashley is awesome, Julia's developement and growth is incredible, the smut scenes are very good. I hope you keep writing this story for a long time, is there an idea on the amount of chapters you want to write?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the praise !

I'm always worried that my smut part are too tame/bad and my plot parts boring, so I'm always glad to see both are liked :).

As for the length remaining, I think I can see the end in a handful of chapters... but nothing is set in stone !

Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2025 1:09 AM Title: Planning the future

Interesting developments! Barbara is being so sweet with Ashley. The imagery of Barbara holding her in her mouth was so powerful; I loved how vulnerable Ashley was.

I can see that Ashley and Julia need to build their relationship back up a bit. I like that you are fully acknowledging how hard the time gap is on them, and how Barbara and Julia have their own relationship now.

I really liked Ashley trying to soften Julia with praise! I hope we see more exploration of Julia's younger mindset, with her seeking validation from Ashley. It gives Ashley a good measure of power in the relationship. (But not quite enough to get knocked up by Barbara.)

Are they going to a country where tinies still have rights? That will be an interesting change in dynamic! e.g. no collar in public. Ashley may be confronted with the opportunity to escape - to be free from Julia, to live independently. And of course she won't take it, but this will have an effect on her relationships.

Cock vore incoming! How will she breathe in there??

Author's Response:

Thanks as always for the review !

Yeah, the strain of the passage of time was something that convinced me to go with the ten months time-skip. Building up the relationship is hard and we can expect some strain to still come to the fore. 

I won't say more on the BarbaraxAshley relationship because it'll be expanded upon in the remaining chapter. Same for the possibility to go to another country, you'll see if it's possible or just a pipe dream next chapter. 

A lot of answers will come with chapter 20 !