Date: February 28 2025 2:59 PM Title: Stays at home
Another good chapter. It was really well written, especially how Barbara deliberately and insistently took a submissive role to Ashley, which clashed with her trauma. That is definitely something I would like to read more of, as the tiny Dom/giant sub is one my favorite tropes in these kinds of stories. It also makes me wonder if Julia would be willing to make an attempt at being submissive to Ashley. After all that she has put Ashley through, she could at least make a genuine attempt at it.
As for the mysteries coming up the next chapter, the first being why Julia and Barbara dont want to talk about the move, and the second being what Ashley has planned for Julia. I have some theories about what it could be. For the first one I feel like the most probable cause is the girl that Julia killed had influential parents/friends, so while there were no legal consequences, they could have put roadblocks in Julia's career path.
For what Ashley is planning, I have three theories:
1. Julia and maybe Barbara will not have any sexual activities with her, putting her love for Ashley on one side versus her sexual urges on the other.
2. has to do with her potential 2nd child, that being that she doesn't want to have it with Julia, maybe have it with Barbara or not at all, or maybe getting inseminated to have a boy or a girl.
3. is that Ashley would like to have a gun for shelf defence.
My final thoughts: It was really cute to read how Ashley was with Samantha, and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
p.s.“Another shot at your milk? Can’t I have something else?” Julia asked. It's meant to be Ashley asking this, isn't it?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
Regarding the ps, it was indeed a typo, it has been corrected, thanks for your keen eye !
I'm glad you liked it, I tried to show another power-dynamic compared to what had been explored until now, and I'm quite happy with how Ashley and Barbara's relationship is progressing. Regarding Julia being submissive, it'd be somewhat strange to me - but it's not impossible, I don't really know where this story is going anyway XD !
Regarding your theories, I can only say one of the things you wrote is right, but the others are not !
You'll see soon enough which one it was, don't worry !