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Reviewer: breastclimber Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2025 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

Yeah Chloe is once again taking a backseat in this chapter. Even when she stuck the 8 inch man into her pussy there was no real description of the event, just the covering of him under the sheet.

I mean Ellie is interesting, but now there is going to be another doll, and I just want to see more Chloe! She is the one with all of the real power! Maybe you should do more of a Chloe focused segment before you get into the next Doll. Give the new Doll more time to gradually come to life

Otherwise it's just an all doll story, and I think it could be a lot more than that!

Cheers though! Enjoyable story overall.

Reviewer: breastclimber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2025 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

There's a double paste in there somewhere, a lot of repeated text, I think right after:

Chloe felt some tears come to her eyes.

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