[Report This]Date: February 13 2025 9:02 PM Title: Drawing from the heart
The golden shower was hot! If I were Ashley, I’d just go along with it. It makes Julia happy and it doesn’t seem like a big deal - it just runs off in the shower. But the power of Julia’s stream was awesome! I love when Ashley gets aroused by Julia’s power. If Ashley doesn’t want to get “marked”, maybe we can get more of it with Julia on Barbara.
You’re really trying to get me to like Ripley :) She did seem supportive! She has totally valid fears that Ashley has Stockholm Syndrome. I’m really looking forward to her meeting Julia.
I loved how you wrote the sketch reveals! You did a great job reminding us how violent Julia’s mind can be, but also how much she adores Ashley. In the violent sketches, I see Julia’s rage. But I also see recognition. The second sketch, with Ashley destroyed by Julia’s cock, shows that Julia knows what would have happened. As angry as she was at Ashley’s rejection, it was the best possible outcome.
It’s heartwarming to see Ashley and Julia communicate about how much they care for each other.
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah, the golden shower was a spur of the moment but it was a good way to show that Julia's every action was truly mighty and too much for Ashley to endure.
Ripley is really a supporting character to her core, truly a friend like we could have a best friend !
The "bad" sketch reveal was an addition on the moment, but the beautiful ones were what I wanted to show in the chapter, but I realized a contrast was needed to make those more impressive.
And they are progressing in their relationship in healthier ways !
But does it mean Julia has lost her darker parts... We shall see, soonish.