[Report This]Date: February 17 2025 2:15 AM Title: Ending C - Ren
Incredible chapter, Ren was awesome this chapter, he actually managed to change the future. Also I'm completely convinced their relationship is now romantic. He is literally calling the light that lights up his existence and his only want when the world is ending is to be with her. Sure that could just be very strong platonic possibly fatherly love.
But then Ryemi has no problem at all being hugged by ren even when shes naked, her nipples got erect when Ren was on it. And she could barely feel him there so it was definitely the thought of him being there that did it. Not to mention she gave Ren quite a show when she put layla in her vagina and winked at him. I highly doubt she would have done that if ryan was there instead of Ren lol. Sure there is the age gap but lucy is a 1000 years old and a romantic relationship between her and ryan did look like a real possibility in part 1. So at least in my head canon ren and ryemi get together lol.
Loved the action this chapter, the bigger the girls the better in my opinion and so Ryemi outgrowing the earth was amazing. Her putting Layla in her vagina like that, damn she really is her mothers daughter lol. It is hilarious that ryemi has appeared completely normal up till now but turns out she has a bit of freak in her as well. She didn't stand a chance when her parents were mimi and ryan lmao. Though after that stunt, Ryemi has no business being weirded out by ryans gts fetish lol.
Also I completely forgot ren had the index. I loved the way it was used by actually letting ren tell ryemi what her domain is. I thought her domain was just copying goddess powers, I did not expect limitless reality warping. Though im assuming the one limitation it has is that it can not directly affect goddesses so she cant just think about a goddess being directly defeated. Since im pretty sure all domains aside from origin cannot directly affect goddesses. So chromphemus will not be able to be revived.
For the cliffhanger im going to predict that mimi may be able to help out as well with the creation power of her domain of origin, since that has been mentioned before and this is the last chance to see it lol. Also ryan has now officially the most overpowered family in the universe lmao. Speaking of ryan and ren as well, looks like the aging problem can be fixed easily now, all ryemi has to do is just imagine ren and ryan young, every few years or she could just straight up make them ageless.
Ren has always been a very calm guy so to see him absolutely lose it at the end and even tell ryemi to stop being a little bitch, Ren has been nothing but kind to Ryemi this entire time, so rens behavior raised the tension and completely caught me off guard.
I realized that in the mimi epilogue, if mimi never sealed ryemis powers, then eventually ren probably would have checked the index, told ryemi about her domain and she could have just brought ryan back to life lmao. If there is a continuation for that then if ryemi finds out what her domain is, then all she has to do is tell her mother and get her powers back. Maybe she could even bring back the millions of people mimi casually killed.
Loved this ending, can't wait for the epilogue
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I've just uploaded the final epilogue so I hope you take a look at it. And please participate in the poll too once you are done reading!
This ending is focused not so much on Ren's own capabilities, but more so on Ren and Ryemi's bond, which ultimately became the difference maker in saving the world. Given that this was the case, it comes as no surprise that you would think there would be more to their relationship since so much focus was put on the both of them in this timeline.
The subtle amount of sexual tension between them is intended, but it's really a part of their complicated and deep relationship dynamic. I wanted their bond to have many sides to it, and to a large extent, they will both struggle with their multi-layered and complex feelings towards each other(whether truly romantic or otherwise). I wanted to stray away from a more standard couple dynamic that we already see in Iggy/Lyre and Mimi/Ryan. The bottom line is that they are both special to each other, but whether that bond is romantic, fatherly, platonic, or an amalgamation of all that and much more, that is something that will be constantly evolving between the two of them. And with Ryemi as a near-omnipotent goddess now, that will introduce even more sides to their already complex dynamic, which would confuse things even more between their perception of each other. In the after-stories, I will do my best to show many sides of the Ryemi/Ren dynamic and hopefully, I will be able to show you the clumsy beauty of their undefinable yet immensely special relationship.
About Ryemi acting really uncharacteristically bold with how she dispatched Layla, that primarily has to do with her experiencing an unparalleled high from growing so big and exercising so much power. That was also why Ryemi was also acting kind of giddy right after her growth. So unfortunately, Ryemi isn't as much of a freak as her parents, but she may continue to exhibit unexpected sides of herself now that she has become a near-omnipotent goddess.
This wasn't stated in the story, but the Domain of Infinity is actually an upgraded version of the Domain of Origin. With what limits the Domain of Infinity actually has, we will just have to wait and see.
I'm happy that you put so much thought into the aging problem for Ryan and Ren. A lot of your past theories and your current one definitely will work in the context of this universe. That may be a theme I will explore in a future story set in this universe, but I probably won't be touching on it that much.
For Mimi's ending, a story will be set in that timeline in the future, but it will feature a drastically different theme and characters and world and tone.
Can't wait to hear your thoughts on the epilogue!
[Report This]Date: February 13 2025 10:45 AM Title: Ending C - Ren
Holy crap this ending have been so good and tragic and this last one with ren was awesome can’t wait to see the epilogue
Can’t wait to what spins off can happen next
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment!
I've just uploaded the final epilogue and work on the after-stories have already began, so not to worry. Please do take part in the poll for your favorite goddess after reading!