Date: June 05 2025 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 30
I am not sure if you are reading reviews here anymore, but I was delighted to see that Brooke 200 still loved Lucas. I think the purpose of the device is to give Lucas the confidence he needs to fully submit to Brooke as the goddess she can be when at full size and intelligence. It's just a matter of him realizing that she will still love him when she is fully in control, instead of him. I hope he gets to that point in future chapters.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2025 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
What a Rollercoaster in the best way possible! One thing that i thought to be amazingly unique about this story is the way you set up the anticipation around Brooke. Having her reaching her peak early on, reverting back, then showing glimpses of her transformation, and using the anticipation of possibly seeing Brooke at her ultimate form to build tension was brilliantly done! That was so much fun wondering if we’d see her again. Some top their writing! Love it!
Author's Response:
Aw thanks so much, Makermanman! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! <3