Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2025 12:28 AM Title: Threesome Troubles

I’ve really enjoyed how you explore Ashley’s insecurities in the relationship. All three of them have blind spots. Ashley pointed out very obvious things to both futas during her outburst, but she herself can’t believe the obvious truth that Julia is infatuated with her.

Julia feeding Ashley was great, as was her recognizing, unprompted, that Ashley needs normal meals too. Julia’s getting better! I love how you incorporate food and other basic necessities into Ashley’s humiliation.

I feel sorry for the futas that their relationships are primarily sexual. It sounds lonely. I think the futas understand lust and sexual pleasure, and perhaps even love, but they seem to lack joy in their lives. Where is the laughter, the contentment? It reminds me of Major/minor where the bigger race is hornier but often less socially adept. I really like that Ashley can teach them something, that her role in the relationship can be the emotional navigator.

It will be nice to see Ashley and Barbara bond a bit over books! They can borrow from each other. I hope Julia doesn’t get too jealous. It was really touching when Julia got upset that she had never made Ashley as happy as when she talked about books. Barbara, as far as we know, is not a psychopath and can connect with Ashley in ways that Julia cannot. I wonder if Julia can learn from how Barbara interacts with Ashley. Not necessarily Julia submitting to Ashley, but being a slightly more normal person to her.

I can’t wait to see Julia’s drawings!

Author's Response:

Reacting a bit late as I hadn't much time sadly ! I'm glad you're still liking the story haha ! Hopefully that'll continue in the future :) !