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Reviewer: Lightning Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2025 11:48 PM Title: Ending B - Mina

Great chapter, Mina made a good effort, though this just emphasized just how well Ryan did in his ending considering how hard it was to even make it to Fae in the first place, especially in just a few minutes. Not to mention Ryan ending gave the best epilogue of the story lmao. The Jacob and Melody moment was really nice, glad to see them make up and I knew Jacob did actually really care about his daughter and I can definitely understand why he did what he did.

I feel that Ren will actual be the secret MVP and the one who will lead to the good ending. I mean even in the chromphemus chapter, when outlining the reasons to choose the person, ryan gets huge compliments, mina gets called a person who can do the impossible and ren just gets a single line about being close to ryemi lol and even in the votes he was last by quite a large margin. Exactly perfect conditions for an underdog comeback lmao.

Also both ryan and mina had their moment to shine, ryan being with his rescue in Artemis and mina giving her divinity and convincing esthesia to stand down. But Ren hasn't really had a moment like that. Despite him being the main protagonist along with ryemi of this part. This part all started with ryemi meeting ren, so it would be actually would be quite fitting if ren was the one to end it all and got his moment. If it wasn't for Ryan I would have definitely chosen Ren, Im betting Ren can get the happy ending and epilogue, though Ryan still got the most entertaining ending and epilogue lmao.

I'm assuming the epilogue for this route is just what if Layla won since minas actions didn't seem to change anything at all. Though I could be wrong and owe mina an apology lol. 




Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing you comments!

In a way, Mina's method was actually a lot more sensible than Ryan's considering she actually tried to get a goddess's help. Ryan was actually stupidly reckless for trying to do it all by himself, climbing onto Ryemi's hair in the heat of the moment.

There are many time travel stories where the time traveler isn't allowed to reveal that he/she was from the future, but this is not one of them, and Mina can just freely let everyone know exactly how to prevent the disaster. Unfortunately, she has very little experience interacting with a goddess from the perspective of a human. Valiant effort by her but her inexperience in this aspect ultimately led to her failure. Given Ryan's abundance of experience in this regard, he would have probably been able to get all the goddesses' attention in time if he had tried Mina's method instead. An unfortunate turn of events but hopefully Ren does better. Meanwhile, do enjoy the epilogue of this route as it is quite different from the others.

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