Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2025 11:09 PM Title: Addicts

No tv?!! That’s harsh. Some of these restrictions just seem spiteful. Ashley’s parents must really love Agatha to put up with it. Will Ashley be able to order Barbara to turn on the tv for her? ;)

It will be hard for Ashley to raise a child when she can barely use the house she lives in, and Julia and Barbara are so large they won’t be able to help much with diapers, etc. As you alluded to last chapter, I really like the dynamic that Ashley’s futa children will vastly outgrow her and have more rights than her.

I was surprised - disappointed? - that Barbara submitted to Julia so quickly. I was hoping for more of a power struggle, to see Julia come out on top. Barbara seems to have some unresolved trauma, based on how she blew up at Ashley and was attracted to Julia because she had a loving relationship with a tiny. We’ve seen “Miss Bauer the bully” and “Barbara the whore”, but I am eager to see how the fully-developed character will fit into Ashley and Julia’s dynamic. The slave stuff is super hot, but if she’s going to be around all day, they need a real relationship, not just kink.

Using her butt to snap Ashley out of her haze was funny. I love gross Julia - bad hygiene is a great bonus humiliation.

I really like how you built up Ashley’s anxiety before the reveal. Things are good right now, but Ashley knows that Julia can make her life miserable in an instant. I wonder if they can get to a point in their relationship where Ashley won’t feel that fear, or if it’s intrinsic to the fact that she is a slave.

You call Barbara “Rebecca” by mistake a few times.

Can’t wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your vigilance, I'll be correction those wrongly written Rebeccas !

Regarding the house, Julia would obviously have accomodations made for her tiny. You'll see over the next few chapters (1-2 or 2-3, not sure yet) about Barbara's experience at the Bootcamp. At least I'll try to explain it !

I think the fear has to be intrinsic. Relationships can be build between tinies and giantesses, but there has to always be that fear, that imbalance. At least I want to keep it, haha !

Thanks for the review !