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Reviewer: It Was Me Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 07 2025 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Next Level

I took a slow step forward, warily eyeing her pussy as I approached, afraid to touch it or get to close lest I provoke it.

I love this line! Given how this whole story has gone, framing Kim's pussy as a predator waiting to be provoked is the perfect metaphor for where her character is at right now.

And Kim pretty much confirms this in her little talk with Candice, when she says that "everyone is with" her now. She sees everyone around her as sex toys but has deluded herself into believing that this is really just a massive polygamist relationship. That's what she tells herself to make it seem like she's not doing anything wrong. I love how thin her justifications are for the progressively more terrible things she's doing.

Like with Monica noticing that Kim actually convinced herself that Monica was crying for her rather than for losing Thomas. In Kim's mind, she's always the victim, and now that mindset has expanded to how she interprets the actions of other people.

Shit, she actually believes that Candace owes her because she exposed that Thomas was "some kind of psycho killer all along," not even considering the fact that Candace broke up with him way before the assassination attempt. Not to mention that "all along" part shows that Kim is ignoring that she was giving them reasons to kill her (although she probably legitimately wouldn't have thought of the food issue anyway). Nope, those people were just killers, and they're attempt to kill her was completely unprovoked.

I can't believe that Monica is eight Candices long! I get why Candice didn't present it that way, but I have to admit, I did find it a little cute when Kim said her legs were four Candices long! God, that whole climbing scene was so fucking hot, from Kim forcing Candice to measure her legs by raising the one she was on to Candice hanging on for dear life as Kim finishes after hearing her height! Between Kim's taunts, Candice's fear, and some great descriptions of the climb, not to mention Jacob eating Kim out right in front of his "match" almost the whole time, this was such an incredible scene.

It didn’t make me forgive her anything, but I understood. No human being should be this big. No human should be put in the position where they can snatch people up with a single hand and hold them like dolls.

I think there's more going on with Kim here, like years of being walked all over in relationships (and probably in life in general, I'd guess, if that was such a big issue for her), but I can't disagree with Candice here.

Kim was such a sweet girl at the beginning of the story. And all it got her was fucked over by Thomas and production when she thought she might have finally found love. So yeah, once Kim had the power to start pushing back, it was easy to justify doing it. She even had Valerie there as a little cheerleader and Charlie as a devil on her shoulder to make her feel all the more certain of what she was doing.

Now, though? Yeah, simply being so big has destroyed any semblance of that nice girl we met on the beach with the other contestants, the girl Brian thought he was saving when he ratted out Darren, Thomas, and company. It's really like the old cliché: Power corrupts, and absolute power corrupts absolutely!

This isn't breaking news or anything, but Jacob is so submissive! I guess that kind of makes sense, since Candace is a dominant girl and maybe that's what she sees in him (and why Thomas and she didn't work out), but I lose a little more respect for Jacob every time we see him now. And I know he was worried about what Kim would do to Candace if she didn't come when called, but ratting her out, blocking her escape, and literally carrying her into the hand of her mortal enemy (and no matter what Kim says, she still sees Candace as an enemy; I mean, that was obvious throughout Candace's segment) reeks of him trying to gain favor with Kim, NOT helping Candace.

Then Candace looks down to see him jacking it between Kim's legs while covered in her cum? Yeah, pathetic about sums it up.

Still, Candace seems to care about him, even trying to catch a glimpse of him while measuring Kim's legs. It's nice that what she feels for him seems to be real. But that's kind of a major theme of the story, right? Kim's insatiable sex drive and deteriorating morality tearing apart couples that actually love each other.

At least Candace gets to suck Jacob's dick, though?

As for Charlie, fuck, even his Pete conscience isn't sticking around to see what comes next!

I love the freak out he was having as "Pete" explained to him what was going to happen once the boat arrived. Honestly, I was so into smut mood that I didn't even think about all the sexual harassment and abuse charges that would come from what Kim's doing now.

I do find it a bit ironic that Charlie has actively stopped attempts to solve his problems, though. Destroying the communications system ensured that they had to last the full time on the island, and the whole reason the assassins were going after Kim was the food issue! Of course, Charlie would have still at least been held partially responsible for the sex crimes, if not Pete's death, had those guys killed Kim, so that wouldn't have solved all his problems anyway, I guess.

But yeah, I agree with Pete's ghost. Charlie is a sick fuck! How could anyone think that vore is the answer just because they saw gorgeous giant Kim looking down at a kitchen full of tiny human morsels licking her plush lips as she's holding their tent over their heads like a cheap food covering. Not me. Nu uh. No, sir.

Yeah, I'm pretty excited for the next chapter!

But hey, this was a great chapter, and I'm so glad to see come back to this! I really look forward to seeing how these last couple chapters take shape!

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