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Reviewer: sanguine tangerine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2025 7:50 PM Title: Goddess is back

Very sweet chapter! I loved seeing how much they care for each other, and Julia supporting Ashley while admitting that she herself needs support too.

Interesting talk of “equals” while they still exist in an owner-tiny dynamic. I think it could make sense as “equal but different”. Equally valued and important, but playing different roles in the relationship. And Julia may see her role as making most of the big decisions.

The reveal that most futas don’t interact with or really care about tinies made the whole setting feel more plausible to me. Tinies are just an easily exploited minority group.

Great reminders of how strong Julia is, and a good explanation of how that’s safe. It’s very hot that Barbara is just as strong, and Ashley will be able to command that strength. She could use Barbara’s strength to be more physically aggressive with Julia.

I like how Julia is reframing the collar as a tool of pleasure. I think as they develop a more solid emotional foundation to their relationship, re-enacting their earlier, traumatic interactions will be a useful tool. Would you consider more role play elements? Now that we’ve established that Julia cares for Ashley, have them agree that she’ll pretend not to care about Ashley for a night. Let Ashley relive her worst moments to give her the catharsis of release when the role play is over. The sensation of Julia telling her she’s important is magnified tremendously when it immediately follows being degraded.



Author's Response:

Remember that for futas, Registered Individuals being "equal" doesn't mean the same thing we impart to this word. For them, tinies are equal in that they can work and being paid, basically. But everything else is them being property. In fact I'm considering a Breeding Bill down the line that could shake Julia and Ashley’s relationship, but it's very much up in the air still.

Tinies are indeed not even an afterthought for most Futanaris. They know they exist, but that's it. They don't care about them at all.

I don't think they will reenact the two weeks of Hell Ashley had, but there is a lot of ways to have kinky interactions there. 

And as always, thanks for the comment !

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