[Report This]Date: January 25 2025 7:39 AM Title: Back to college
Ok, the “you don’t talk back to me” was pretty scary, and not a sign of a healthy relationship. Dominant or not, Julia needs to be able to fight with Ashley without exploding or zapping her.
She really did some psychological damage with that collar. I loved the mood-change when Ashley talked about Julia discarding her, and I hope Julia also reflects on Ashley’s terror of the collar afterwards. I thought you wrote the scene very well. Does Ashley really believe what she said, that she expects to die by Julia’s cock? I think Ashley still needs to separate her fears from her desires.
Interesting that Ashley wanted to deliberately debase herself as much as possible to calm Julia. I would like to see Ashley try to be more strategic with how she emotionally pushes at Julia. She still has some fire in her, which was very nice to see with Rebecca. I hope Marc is ok. I want to see more of the experiences of other tinies.
The additional humiliations were fun. The clothing is just rude, considering Julia was the one who threw out her old clothes, and she now has all of Ashley’s money and could use it to buy her more clothes. And the internet restrictions were chilling. Could Julia unlock Ashley’s phone if she chose?
Ripley frustrated me a lot. I acknowledge that she’s the nicest futa we’ve seen other than Agatha, but she seemed to be self-rationalizing her lies to Ashley to hide her own desires. Her reason doesn’t make sense. A tiny could just as easily harm themselves after being registered. I think it’s more likely even, unless a majority of futas are a lot nicer than Julia.
The strength lore was neat. I can’t wait to see Julia’s absurd strength in action!
Great work!
Author's Response:
Yeah, the collar turned out to be a really great tool, both to create humiliating situations, and also to confront Julia and force her to see the consequences of her actions. In the Chapter 6, currently being written, I try to show how our giantess feels about it all, how she struggles with her personality disorder and how she is, slowly, realizing it's truly an obstacle in the way to the relationship she wants to have with Ashley.
The fears of Ashley will also be adressed next chapter (but I haven't started writing this part yet, I think chapter 6 will be really long, as I don't really want to split it up).
I can assure you that Marc is perfectly okay, now that he is the treasured tiny in a trouple ^^. Futanaris are intenses, but they can be gentle, and while he was dispirited, Rebecca wasn't demeaning to him, just a little mean.
Regarding the clothing, she used Ashley's money to buy her her new wardrobe, so she doesn't want to uses more of it for more clothes yet (because, of course Julia can't even grasp the idea of using her own - considerable - funds to do so).
Finally, regarding the strengh lore, it's largely exagerated - Julia would have obliterated Ashley when she backhanded her otherwise. But she is way stronger than almost anyone on Earth, and it may come in a future display.
Date: January 25 2025 4:26 AM Title: Back to college
I think you are a terrific writer and you are doing a great job here.
I love the S/M aspect of this story and focus on humiliation instead of violence, which is so common on this site.
I also really like both characters, and they have a great chemistry, since both of them a battling conflicting natures. Julia absolutely loves Ash, but her sexual side gets off on humiliating, dominating and debasing her.
Ash, on the other hand wants freedom and dignity of a normal person, but has very strong closeted masochistic sexual urges.
I look forward to new chapters, and thanks for writing the ones you did so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the praise !
Humiliation is indeed something I'd rather focus on that pure violence, as I feel Julia's character would never be able to get back on something healthier if she got off using direct violence on Ashley. And both of them are indeed struck in a situation where different portions of their personalities are at odds with each other. They need to find a way to reconcile them, otherwise everything will just blow up in their face. Badly.
Date: January 24 2025 4:47 PM Title: Back to college
I'm really liking this story, I think it's a nice mix of porn with plot. One thing I would really like to read. Is for julia to give ashlynn free reign of her body without Julia forcing her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review !
I have something like that in mind, but I don't know in how many chapters it'll happen. Perhaps the next, perhaps later.