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Reviewer: NineFoxTail Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2025 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)

I'm really curious about the love story between Ignis and Lyre. How did they confess their love and enjoy it together for Ignis to end up falling for Lyre?

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2025 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)

Absolutely amazing!!!!! And she’s back let’s gooo !!!!

and Iggy being there added with Ly just made it better can’t wait to see what happens next chapter dude 



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Hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint!

Reviewer: Lightning Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2025 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)

Amazing chapter, I did say it would be hilarious if ryemi found out about Ryans gts fetish but I did not think it would actually happen lmao. I completely forgot mina would know about it. Though mina has no room to talk about ryan, with the sexual stuff she has done to humans in the past. Im pretty sure mina called ryan handsome at the time and even encouraged him to come back later for some activities lol.

Ryemis and Ryans relationship right now is really funny though I am hoping it will be a very wholesome and nice relationship overall. This story already has enough bad fathers daugher relationships, with mimi, melody and layla lol. Though its only laylas that was actually really bad.

I cant really blame Jacob for how hes acting, especially about killing Estheia, like shes been killing billions of innocents for 10 000 years and started this whole mess. Its nice to see that melodys and jacobs relationship is still pretty good for the most part. Like even while hes raging he still uses an affectionate nickname for her lol.

I am pretty surprised at how easily Estheia agreed, but I guess seeing mina change so much for the better, just by spending a few days with people, pretty much goes against her entire world view.

Finally chrophemus uses her power, yeah she is definitely powerful if she can even affect layla. Im pretty sure she will be important in the final battle as well. Im assuming if it wasnt for layla she might have been able to end the 1000 year cycle herself with her power and popularity with other goddesses.

Also my man Ryan is getting roasted from every angle. By mina, ryemi and iggy lol. I think he needs one more epic moment to redeem himself in his daughters eyes. Or just have Mimi reveal that she is a bigger freak then ryan could ever be lol. Im pretty sure Mimi would be estatic if she learned about ryans gts fetish. At that point ryemi might just get ren to adopt her lmao.

Finally Mimi returns, Ive looked forward to this for a while. Nice to see she still loves ryan just as much, she even checked on him before her own daughter. This is also the first time mimi has actually seen ryan from her big size since ryan fled last time and before that mimi couldn't see humans. The situation is pretty serious now but just mimi forgetting everything and instantly getting slightly arroused at the sight of ryan so small and vulnerable in front of her would be hilarious. Especially since ryemi would realize that both her parents are freaks lol.

Lyre has been living the dream with Iggy, what ryan could have had with mimi if he didnt run away. Though speaking of Iggy im assuming faye must have revived her or something in the past since im pretty sure layla killed her in the past.

So Mimis kill count has been confirmed, over a million and it even says what she did. Yeah that is definitely going to be a bombshell when it drops. Looking forward to seeing more mimi and ryan.





Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your thoughts again!

I guess the contrast between Mina's past reaction to Ryan invading her mouth to her current mortification shows how much her worldview has shifted regarding humans. Back when she used to see them as toys, Ryan's intrusive act did little to ruffle her feathers. But things are different now that she sees humans as equal beings. It is a similar idea as to why Ithyrminah could parade around in her underwear all day without a care back then, but now she displays bashfulness and embarrassment when baring her body in front of humans. Being seen naked by bugs is not something even worth thinking about while being seen naked by beings that you regard as people is a whole different story.

Nice that you can see where Jacob is coming from. Even if peace gets achieved, it can be expected that many of the humans will still harbor resentment towards the goddesses, and rightfully so for all their lost families and friends. I think Jacob lets us keep in view that perspective that countless humans definitely empathize with.

Reviewer: J - Vader Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2025 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)

Absolutely amazing!!!!! And she’s back let’s gooo !!!!

and Iggy being there added with Ly just made it better can’t wait to see what happens next chapter dude 



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and I'm glad you liked the chapter! Hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint!

Reviewer: 1337noob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2025 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)

I liked seeing this chapter from Mina's perspective as a newly "demoted" human, although part of me wishes she spent more time with Melody.

Estheia was easier to persuade than I thought, I was expecting a fight where she had to be taken down. Perhaps it was specifically because it was Mina trying to convince her?

Poor Ryan can't catch a break, first he gets teased by Iggy and Mina for his preferences, now even his own daughter thinks he's sus. Hopefully Mimi is here to the rescue, in more ways than one.

Finally, my man Lyre is living the dream! I wonder how they keep their relationship spicy after 16 years, and if Iggy prefers human size or goddess size.

Looking forward to the next one as always!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Estheia can be pretty set in her ways, and Lucy did have to fight her in the previous chapter because of that. But you are right that she has a soft spot for Mina.

As for whether Iggy prefers doing it normal size or otherwise, I think we all know the answer.

Reviewer: Coolman30000 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2025 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Humans (Mina)

SHES BACK! SHES BACK! HOLY SH*T SHES BACK im so excited to see that the old gang and the new gang are finally together again, well, without amara but i know we'll see her soon enough, i think mina ( i concede on calling her her goddess name its impossible ) breaking down the relationship between ryan and ryemi due to ryan's irrefutable giantess fetish, which we already got a glimpse off in the first part ( when lucy used her powers on ryan to uncover his desires, if you dont remember this, its on the origin chapter 17 - desires ), well we could say mina was pretty spot on with her sixth sense.


Lyre and Ignis being on that kind of relationship was pretty expected, though what i didnt expect is them going to town human size or goddess size, lyre, you devilish fella, what a man.


and going back to a more serious note, chrophemus using her power to slow down time is a great inclusion here, since thats what id expect for her to do: not acting until absolutely necessary, shes definately gonna be one of the goddesses to help mend the relationship between humans and goddess once all of this is settled.


The next chapter will be pretty interesting as its either gonna be from the perspective of ryan, the boyfriend, and ryemi, the daughter... its definately gonna be quite a read when it shows up. 


Thanks for the chapters!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments!

Glad that you enjoyed seeing some of the old characters come back. And I have to say that you are correct that Chrophemus will be playing a very important role in the story.

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