Reviewer: Sereum Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2025 2:41 AM Title: Abudcted

I love this story! The dynamic between Julia, Ashley, and Barbara is really hot and I can't wait to read what type of kinky shit they'll get up too. As soon as I read Miss Bauer deepthroating Julia all I could think about was Julia cock voring Ashley then cumming her down Miss Bauer throat then being brought back up since Julia wouldn't ever let any serious harm happen to her. Anyways definitely one of the hottest giantess futa stories I've read.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review !

I think that Julia would veto a deppthroating release of Ashley from her balls. But now I have that idea in mind, so who knows !

Reviewer: expenti0 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24 2025 12:49 PM Title: Abudcted

I'm actually not that much of a fan that the MC is essentially broken at that point and basically has no fight left, instead going along with everything that's thrown at her no matter how bad.

While it might be crass, she would actually have a way to assert dominance over Julia. And that's threatening with suicide.
She was already close to it during the first two weeks. It wouldn't actually be that much of a jump. The fact that she could basically throw that into her face and completely destroy that giant asshole by doing so would be the cherry on top. Julia is thrown between making her suffer, and love. However, actual damage would completely throw her off. Ashley wouldn't even have to go all the way. Every kind of damage to her body would suffice. Next time shock collar, cut open your wrist. Or simply bite it open. Or bite through your tongue. Ram your head against the wall. The main point would be that Julia is too crude to even prevent it. She can't do first aid, she can't even successfully restrain her from harming herself, because she is harm herself. All she knows is violence and terror, but you can't terrorize someone who essentially has given up and does those things based on the fact that living without Julia making heavy concessions would be too bleak. It's even a question if hospitals still treat tinies, which would make those threats all the more severe. If she'd show Julia that for any attempt to make it worse for her, for any demeaning action she'd be one step closer to losing her, yep, that would have effect. If the next time she pushes her ito her panties, them slowly filling with her tongue blood may do wonders.

(Not sure how that appeal/openly declaring that one's dying would work, but it might at least be officially questionable if it comes out that people are killing tinies, or that Julia's "care" is doing so, yet given what we saw the Registration Act is essentially an ethnic cleansing, so that may not work)

The story riled me up quite a lot, because I feel with the "slaves" in this kind of story. If one wants to be free they should be able to at least fight for it with everything they got. Do everything one can to make the oppressors realize their mistake. And if they on't cause enough harm that it becomes apparent.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review !

I agree with basically all of it, but self-mutilation and suicide (even threatened) are something that really, really make me squirm. Not that it won't happen in the story, everything is possible. But it's really something I'm not comfortable with. However, I definitely wants Ashley to fight for her rights, and Julia to understand that, for her to truly form some durable and (relatively) healthy with Ashley, she needs to allow her friend to get out of the bad spiral she's in. Which is extremely difficult for her, considering her personality. The shift from a one-shot to a longer story means that I got a true end point to reach and somewhat of a slow-burn (not too slow, hopefully!)

What I'd want is for Ashley to use her life outside the house to regain some form of confidence in herself, to reassert herself, slowly but surely. It'll also be a great opportunity to showcase what the "registered individuals" truly go through, and how it affects them and the Futanaris around them. Of course, Julia remains largely a threat to her self confidence, but the events of chapter 4 will have had an effect on our giantess threat also. Ideally, I'd like the story to finish on the two of them in a healthy-ish relationship, with Julia truly doing efforts and attemps to better herself for Ashley's sake, while Ashley will find a balance between the submissive tendency her owner had induced in her (a return, with a vengeance, to who she had been when Julia grew as a teenager) and her more dominant, outgoing, natural personality.

Of course, it is one of my darker stories, so the imbalance between the two won't entirely be erased (it is, in any case, inherent to the Giantess genre, as one partner is often smaller than the other, considerably so, and thus at the mercy of the Giantess' whims and desires). But overall, now that it isn't just a grim one-shot, I want submission from Ashley's part to be freely given, hers to give so to speak, and not something Julia forces on her. Which isn't the case currently, of course, and it's something that Julia herself will need to recognize and try to correct, basically undoing her actions (both the one when she was 15 and in grief, and those of the last two weeks).