Really great story so far. MAJORS/minors is one of my favorite series on the site, and I am glad to see it continue. I love the way the superiority of the MAJORS is balanced against the greater proficiency with the bond that minors possess.

I love Audrey’s character. A realistic minor who strives for independence but still gets overwhelmed sometimes. I hope you don’t end the story with her robbed of her memory. As painful as it may be, it was a key part of her character growth. Validation that she could be independent. If she doesn’t remember that, her relationship with Megan will be based on a lie.

I have complicated thoughts about Megan. At first I was annoyed about how narcissistic she was and how she objectified Audrey, but her thoughts make more sense when you realize that she is a MAJOR and has a different mind than us. I still don’t think she quite respects Audrey enough, but I think Audrey can look after herself too. We’ll see what the last chapter brings.