Wow! I expected Naomi to get her hands on Rebecca before the end of the trip, but I didn't expect Trevor to be involved, let alone a fucking massacre like that! 

When Naomi interrupted Amber fucking Rebecca a few chapters back, asking who Amber was talking to, I was sure Naomi would put Rebecca's life in danger and that Amber would swoop in and save her. That scene stood out too much to be nothing special. I'm sure that Rebecca knew Amber had a tiny with her then and that this is how she knew to look for Rebecca (although, to be fair, she could have just found Rebecca on the couch after Amber passed out).

I do have to respectfully, yet emphatically disagree with my good friend breatclimber, though. I can't blame anybody for having sympathy for Naomi (I do), and she's not like the other three bratty teens at all! Her reasons for doing what she did were entirely different from her peers.

First, I think you have to look at the abuse she suffers at the hands of her mother. Victoria hitting her is clearly not a recent development. Who knows how long violence has been such a prominent part of Naomi's life. But beyond that, you have to think about why Victoria is hitting her. She doesn't see Naomi as a daughter or even as a person, really. Naomi is a prop to Victoria, a living doll, just an extension of herself. She's not worried about Naomi's goth phase because she thinks it's a bad influence or some shit like that.

No, she hates Naomi's goth look and behavior because she's embarrassed by it. Think about that. There's no love in that relationship. In a lot of ways, Victoria treats Naomi like a tiny, trying to control her like property. The only difference is that Naomi isn't tiny and can therefore kind of fight back.

Also, Victoria's feelings on tinies in general are well known to Naomi. Her bratty "You do it. Why can't I?" questions are immature, yes, but they're also not wrong. If Victoria is doing it, how can she not expect Naomi to follow her example.

And I still say the only reason Victoria even wanted custody of Naomi was to take her away from her father, just to be a petty bitch. Naomi has been denied what, based on what little we know about him, seems like a decent parent because her monster of mother wanted him to suffer and is willing to make Naomi suffer to do so. So she has no good adult influences in her life and is oppressed by extreme authority.

Then we have Tempest Midnight, the role model. Looking at how terrible Victoria is, it only makes sense that Naomi would look elsewhere to learn how to live her life. Ironically, it's Victoria's own miserable lifestyle that has driven her daughter to become something she hates. But Tempest Midnight isn't some harmless goth influencer. No, she talks about exuding power by squishing tinies. Take power back from the adults in your life by dominating the tiny ones and showing the their place, which is a stain on her foot, apparently.

This is the only outlet that Naomi knows to take back some semblance of control in a life where all of it has been stripped from her, even at age 18. That's why she revels in it so much. That's why she embraces the goddess talk. And that's why she's temporarily lost in the illusion in almost trance-like state, desperate to crush Trevor by the end of it, consequences be damned!

This is a kid that needs help. Clearly. Her spoiled, bratty nature has nothing to do with what she did to those slaves. That was something much deeper and much more disturbing.

I mean, if access was the only thing separating Naomi from the other teens, then why didn't Amber squish Rebecca when she first brought the tiny home? Only Trevor knew she was there, and Amber could have just not told him and then no one would have known. She could have squished Rebecca for fun at any time with no consequences, yet she never did. That's because, despite her bratty nature and lust for power and dominance (a lot of which she probably got from her mother), Amber isn't really a bad kid deep down.

Neither are Abigail and Chloe, who were so innocent and cute in their domination of Trevor that an extra paragraph had to be added to make sure we knew that they did what they did because of their privilege and ignorance to a world that doesn't bend to their will because of their wealth and size. Honestly, they were so gentle and sweet, even while drunk, that I wouldn't have even thought of that if it hadn't been outright stated after everything was done. I mean, Trevor never actually told them no and kind of seemed more willing than not to smell their feet and lick their pussies. Hell, who knows how long it would have taken them to build up the courage to bring it up if Trevor hadn't got tired of waiting and wanted to get it over with. It was even noted how gentle Chloe was in lowering him inside her panties and that Abigail actually tried to fish him out of her pussy before passing out (I found this scene super adorable, by the way, in case you couldn't tell).

I just can't see how you can compare that behavior to anything Naomi did in this chapter. Access has nothing to do with why Naomi behaved so differently from the other three.

In fact, I'm pulling for the opposite of breatclimber's hope: I want Victoria to shrink and be at Naomi's mercy. That just seems so much more poetic and just to me.

But this was also a huge chapter for Amber!

I kind of feel like her view toward tinies (or at least Trevor) is starting to shift. Yeah, she called him a worm and said he was gross when Chloe asked if he was her dad, but when he told her the feeling was mutual, she didn't feel the urge to put him in his place. This could just be a sign of the "put in their place" excuse really serving to cover deeper feeling that she has for Rebecca, and I do think that's part of it, but there was a time when she would want to punish Trevor for defying her. Now, while she did think about those past acts of dominance, she had no desire to do anything to him being rude to her now.

More significantly, she seemed legitimately worried for Trevor when Naomi almost killed him. She yelled at Naomi to stop, and she didn't move toward Naomi because she was worried that a sudden move would get Trevor killed. To be fair, maybe this was just her caring about her mom and knowing she would be devastated if anything happened to Trevor. But I don't think we've really seen that out of Amber when it comes to her mom. There's love there on both sides, but that relationship is definitely strained. So I lean more toward Amber worrying about Trevor as a person more than as a slave her mom would be sad to lose. Who knows, maybe that new feeling that she came to understand when she saw Rebecca in danger actually helped her see the humanity in all tinies and this will be a turning point in how she treats them from now on.

I'm not ready to go quite that far in my speculation yet, but I feel like these things are signs that she could be trending that way, potentially setting her up for a confrontation with Donnica in the future.

Backtracking, though, drunk Amber going after Rebecca was a fun scene. I love how she thought she wanted to dominate Rebecca, then convinced herself that she was going to dominate Rebecca with pleasure! This is what she wanted to do to Rebecca, give Rebecca really, last chapter, when she felt that sting of rejection after Rebecca turned her down on the beach. She wants to make Rebecca feel good, to show Rebecca her love, but she can't admit that to herself, let alone Rebecca. So it takes her getting drunk to go through with it, and she has to tell herself that this is a way to "dominate" Rebecca. The passion in Amber's eyes as she does this and the way she giggled once she finished indicate more a sense of giddiness than a feeling of power and dominance. She was happy that Rebecca enjoyed herself so much.

And fuck did Rebecca enjoy herself. I'm so glad that she relented and merely convinced herself that this wouldn't work. If this had been a rape scene, it would have read very differently. But Rebecca wanted this, even if she, too, couldn't admit it to herself. Yeah, she said it wouldn't work, but she also read up on the subject and kind of knew that it would. She can say she didn't believe it all she wants, but she had to know that it at least could have worked. So, once that reveal had been made, I became thoroughly convinced that Rebecca wanted Amber to get her off, to give her the orgasm(s) of her life, but she couldn't admit it to herself. So she had to doubt the effectiveness of Amber's tongue, lips, and mouth.

But, jumping ahead now, when Amber saw Rebecca in danger, that feeling of protectiveness, the fear that someone might take her Rebecca away from her, was such a powerful moment. Her tackling Naomi and fighting her so intensely punctuated the scene so well. And of course Naomi fights dirty with that thumb to the eye.

But I like how you didn't show us what happened next between Amber and Rebecca. Of course, I also hate that you didn't show us what happened next between Amber and Rebecca. The question of how Rebecca and Amber feel about each other now and what they'll do next is almost maddening. Will things go back to how they were, and if they do, will either of them change at all? Or will they finally acknowledge what's been growing between them all this time? Will Amber start being more openly caring toward Rebecca? Will Rebecca feel grateful or maybe even be loving toward Amber? Will she at least stop being so vicious with her insults?

There's so much anticipation built here after everything that happened in this chapter, and I think it was smart to save it for the next one (or whenever else we see these two again if the next chapter is a strictly Trevor and Donnica one). Give that shit space to breathe on its own and certainly don't rush it in the backend of a chapter like this one!

Donnica's behavior throughout the chapter is so interesting to me. One of the things that stuck out the most was her use of the word "agenda." It confused Trevor, but I think I get it.

Donnica is a true believer. Victoria just loves making everyone miserable and tinies are easy targets. Olivia and Katherine simply enjoy being above the tinies and having them service their giant feet. But Donnica? She absolutely believes all of her own hype about giants being superior beings to the tinies. To her, Trevor talking about witnessing three murders is him trying to promote a pro-tiny agenda, because giants, goddesses, have the divine right to do what they want with tinies in her head. That's an absolute truth to her, which I think frames her actions a little bit differently than the other giantesses we've seen thus far.

Of course, there's some major cognitive dissonance there when it comes to Trevor, who she views as above even her own friends and fellow goddesses. But that's part of what makes Donnica so interesting. Trevor can cut through even her most devout beliefs, which is why we've seen some moments where her superior air is broken and she becomes just a woman in love, like at the end of this chapter, for example.

But man, when Donnica entered the room and took control after Naomi's massacre, that was crazy. Donnica commanded more respect from Naomi than Victoria does. And Donnica fucking hit Naomi, and Victoria didn't say shit about it! Hell, she wanted Naomi to apologize to Donnica! As a parent myself, that reaction is just so alien to me, but Donnica is so dominant, so in control, that no one even questions that shit.

I saw one reviewer call Donnica a giantess among the giantesses. I think that's a great way to put it. I keep saying that Donnica actually views herself being above everyone, not just the tinies, even if she doesn't fully realize it. This was a great example of that.

Donnica's heartfelt talk with Trevor at the end of the chapter is why I love her so much. She got wrapped up in her friends' way of thinking and her anger at her fight with Trevor, but, when it matters most, she remembered how she really feels and showed him her true self, the one buried under all that ambition and need to control. It was so sweet, especially that line about how she's "going to fucking listen now" as she prepared to go beat some Victoria bitch ass.

It was also great to see Donnica confirm her real reasons for killing that job opportunity. She only wants to love and protect him and give him everything he wants. She's in love, and she's worried about him. She wants to spoil him. She has the money to do that, too. She just doesn't understand why this was so important to him. She doesn't get that this was about reclaiming a small part of what he lost when he shrank, about being productive in society for once. I think that in this setting, she actually might have been receptive to that.

The make up between them was so great, and it made me feel content. Of course, that paragraph about resentment at the very end is a little unsettling. That's likely to lead to some bad shit between the two of them down the road, although it doesn't necessarily have to (but it probably will).

However, I feel like Trevor now shares responsibility for whatever comes of this. He had Donnica's ear, the real Donnica. This was his chance to explain why this was important and nip this problem in the bud, so that if another opportunity arose in the future, they'd be ready for it. At the very least, he could been at peace instead of feeling any form of resentment. But he didn't do that. Yeah, I agree that it was noble of him to put her feelings first and bury that shit to keep from adding to her guilt and fears. But this was a conversation they needed to have. If shit goes south with this relationship because of this, he'll have no one to blame but himself beyond this point.

But yeah, another fucking amazing chapter here! You paid off a lot of build here, while still building in other areas. I'm so excited to see where the story goes next!

This chapter, damn. I love it so much! The way you describe the intervention of Donnica, it's almost like she is a giantess, even among people her size. And the passage with Naomi is really good too; I love when she's lost just to be put in her place by a truly powerful woman. And I enjoy the relationship between Amber and Rebecca more and more. It's so different from the one between Trevor and Donnica. Every chapter is so nice, even when there's less action; the construction of the world and the characters makes it so enjoyable to read. It's the perfect balance. Thanks you so much it's not often you find a story with this quality 

Oh to be in the mouth of giantess like that! Rebecca is so lucky!

Wow, Naomi, out of nowhere almost kills both protagonists!

It was really sweet to see how much Donnica loves Trevor, and vice-versa. But yeah his lingering resentment isn't going to go away. Somehow he needs to use Donnica's promise to listen to him more to make her really listen to him.

Riveting chapter, thanks!