[Report This]Date: January 20 2025 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Identity (Mina)
Great chapter, I wasn't expecting Estheia to have such a kinder side. Also wouldn't her kill count be a lot higher since in part 1 when she fought Amara, I am pretty sure their clash destroyed some cities.
Nice to see Mina actually still being a good person even with her memories back. Though I cant blame Jacob for what he was trying to do considering what hes seen of Mina in the past.
Looks like Melody will finally become a goddess, though I definitely didn't expect Mina to rip her shard out, she is really trying to redeem herself lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Good observation about her battle with Amara, perhaps it should be a little higher but I thought a few hundred would be a decent albeit conservative estimate.
I wanted to show that Mina really is a good person at heart. The atrocities she commited in the past were all based on her just not seeing humans as individuals. Living as a human in a human group, no matter how bad the experience was, forced her to confront the fact that these people were not just toys or bugs but intelligent and aspiring individuals.
Date: January 09 2025 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Identity (Mina)
Firstly, im going to need to write an apology form specifically for ithyrminah for completely forgetting she is also a main character now, though from the way shes being set up.... i have high hopes for her, both as a part of the story, being a main character, and being a goddess who now treats humans as an equal ( yeah i dont really have much to say its mostly just apologizing for ithyrminah for completely forgetting chapter 9 existed )
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment!
She was introduced really late into the series so it's understandable. I really only have a few chapters left to flesh her out(especially given the fact that we have 4 main characters to juggle through now, there's really not that many more chapters left that will be in Mina's perspective before the ending), but I hope that I'm doing a good job so far. I'm probably never going to try a series that juggles this many POVs again, I will probably stick to at most 2 just like in part 1.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2025 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Identity (Mina)
That's really trusting of Mina to give her divinity to Melody, not what I had expected but I do hope Melody repays her faith.
I think Estheia can be a sweet motherly type if she didn't have a vendetta against the humans.
Also I saw your comment about wanting to see our thoughts on Ryan's and Ryemi's relationship. Personally I hope Ryemi gets to coddle her father a bit, as it's rare that we get to see a situation of a younger giantess caring for an older male.
Looking forward to the next one as always!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind support!
We don't really know much about Melody yet, so I guess it's normal to be suspicious of her. As for Estheia, I think this is the first time we've seen a non-hostile side to her, I hope it adds more depth to her as a character even if she hasn't had the most screen time.
For Ryemi and Ryan, you are right that we don't really have many instances of a younger giantess caring for an older male yet. It's mostly been younger giantess bullying an older male so far...We'll just have to see if that will continue to be the case or not.
[Report This]Date: January 09 2025 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Identity (Mina)
Wow chapters so far have been crazy can’t believe we are so close to the end now at least for part 2 I’m assuming part 3 is in progress or something else ?
Either way I hope melody and Mina are true friends and she’s true to her words rather than something else
plus Mina regaining her memory and her still not wanting to kill Jacob is actually pretty cool and great character building.
overall great stuff
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review!
To answer your question, Part 2 will be the last part of the story 'The Origin', but will not be the last series set in this universe. Something else is already in progress so not to worry, I will be posting more stories after part 2 ends.
Mina's introduction as a 'main' character was really late into the story, but I hope I still did justice to her character development in spite of that. Her role in part 2 will become very clear in the next few chapters, so you can look forward to that if you like her!