Reviewer: Lightning Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2025 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Book (Ryemi)

Awesome chapter, I was not expecting the index book to actually be in the story. I think that Mimis entry is going to be a bombshell, particularly the kill count. I was wondering if mimi destroying that city at the end of part 1 would come up again and I think this is the way it will. This will probably destroy Ryan and Ryemi if they see a kill count of like a million or something.

Also finally Ryan and Ryemi meet, I think it was done pretty well and I definitely look to more scenes between the two of them in the future. She probably will think hes amazing after he saved everyone and is basically the leader of Artemis. Then she may find out about his giantess fetish and maybe even discover how much of a freak mimi is as well at some point lmao.

The layla reveal was pretty big but to me a reveal that was just as big is that mimi has never shrunk down in front of Ryemi ever. Unless she has actually somehow lost the ability to shrink down or just physically cant do it anymore for some reason. Then she has never even hugged her daughter in her life just because she does not want to be human sized even for a bit. I can now see why ryemi was so eager to find her human father.

Im really looking forward to seeing Mimi now and just how much she has changed and her meeting up with ryan and ryemi again. Despite how much shes changed I still think she will tackle ryan to the ground when she sees him, since even her profile in part 1 mentioned her undying loyalty to ryan. If her profile still has a line like that, I can imagine ryan blushing until he gets to the kill count lol. 

Of course finally the layla reveal, yeah I knew she was suspicious but this just completely confirmed that she is a goddess and not just someone linked to them. As for predictions, I think she could be the emperors daughter from the past chapters. Since chrophemus was terrified so it cant just be some random goddess.

Could possibly be the goddess of solitude and layla does like to be a loner but I still think the emperor daughter is more likely. As she cried when she first entered Artemis and said it reminded her of her old home. She had no reason to fake cry so I think this was sincere and since Artemis is a futuristic city, it probably is very similar to the kind of city the emperors daughter lived in back when humanity's technology was really advanced.

Author's Response:

Thanks for another amazing review!

Yeah, the idea about the index struck me when I was contemplating whether or not to put in an info entry for each goddess in part 2 even after they were already featured in part 1. I wanted to change things up so that it doesn't seem repetitive and in the process, I considered tying it into the actual plot itself.

There are a lot of ways for Ryan and Ryemi's relationship to progress now that they have finally met, I would like to hear more of your thoughts on what kind of dynamic they will have in the future.

I can see that you are really excited to see Mimi again, she will definitely have some moments in the later parts of the story, but whether or not they will be what you expect...that's a different thing.

There's a lot of speculation about Layla's identity among other people as well, but I will just neglect to comment about her for now. I will say that it is pretty cool to see that you still remember the Goddess of Solitude from part 1. She was only mentioned in a subtle one-liner by Chrophemus and I was pretty sure 90% of readers have already forgotten about it by now.