Reviewer: Lightning Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2025 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Rescue (Ryan)

Amazing chapter, this was awesome. Easily one of my favorites. Looks like I was right about a few things lol. I'm really glad it was Ryan. In my review for part 1 back when it ended, I actually did mention it would be really cool if you did a scene where Ryan somehow rescues everyone after it felt like he was getting a little out shined by mimi. Well I would say you definitely delivered!

I did not except the return of the godkiller though. That was awesome, especially the way ryan used it. Both epic and hilarious. Also I like how he has now made both iggy and fae climax before he has done anything with Mimi willingly. I kind of want Mimi to find this out and just jump him lmao. Maybe she would just trap him on her body and not let him leave until hes satisfied her.

Nice to see Ryan and Ren getting along and already working together. And of course finally ryemi gets to meet ryan. Once again incredible chapter, I really enjoyed this, pretty much everything I wanted to happen actually happened but in an even better way.

Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your thoughts again!

Good prediction on Ryan being the one to save Artemis, I hope I did a good job detailing how he managed to do it. Mimi's role in this story is definitely a lot smaller than part 1 so you may not get to see too much of Ryan X Mimi moments, but there will still be some.

However, Mimi is one of my favorite characters and I do want to do more with her in the future. So do keep updated on my future works after this one ends and you might be able to see her again.