Reviewer: It Was Me Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2025 5:17 AM Title: PART 13

The job thing with Trevor is really interesting.

I think Donnica's reaction to Trevor almost drowning is a bad sign for him regarding that talk. Donnica respects Trevor enough to not force him to do what she wants, but she also loves him deeply. She let him out by himself at the pool, then he almost died. Now she's not allowing him out there on his own again. So while she can't bring herself to force Trevor to do what she wants selfishly, she will force him to not do things that she thinks are dangerous, and I think, even aside from her obviously not wanting him to leave her house or work in general, there are some safety concerns with going out into the world to work like it seems like Trevor is about to do.

So this will obviously be a fight, and I'm really curious to see where that goes. Donnica's going to be tested here, and I think she's going to fail, at least initially. I think she's going to metaphorically put her foot down (she wouldn't do that literally to Trevor), but I don't think Trevor is going to stand for that. Ultimately, though, I think Trevor's stubbornness is going to win out, and he'll get her onboard with this. I have a few thoughts about how this might come about (which I won't mention in case I happen to be right), but the big thing is that Trevor is going to let her know that he's fighting so that he can feel like he's worth something for a change. I think, surprisingly, this is going to resonate with Donnica, who thinks all tinies are worthless (except Trevor). I think, in the end, she's going to respect that, especially if the proper sequence of events happens to help him drive that point home. She doesn't want him to feel that way, and she doesn't think he's worthless like she does everyone else.

I also thought it was really revealing that Donnica noted in the narrative that she placed Trevor above her friends (although they don't really seem like close friends anymore, do they?). We saw this before, when Donnica remembered putting Anabel in her place for daring to take shit about Trevor. Honestly, I don't think Donnica just thinks she's better than tinies. I think that she thinks that she's better than everyone, and that manifests itself more clearly with tinies because it's easier to fuck with them. Also, Trevor gave her that goddess-level confidence way back in chapter two, so I think that plays a role in why she more openly thinks that way about tinies than other normal-sized people. But, to me, she clearly does feel the same way about her "peers."

Which is why I think, based on the way Donnica stared down Victoria after she "saved" Trevor (Donnica obviously knew something more was going on there), that at least Victoria is going to be way worse off at the end of this trip than she is right now. Maybe the same could go for Olivia and Katherine as well, depending on if they get a little bold with Trevor. There's more than one way to ruin someone's life than squishing them. That's all I'm saying.

Amber and Rebecca keep getting more and more interesting as this story progresses.

First and foremost, anytime you hear somebody, real or fictional, say something like, "You're not better than me," that's about as clear a sign that the person saying it thinks the person they're talking to is better than them as you could possibly get. And it was clear to me throughout this chapter that Amber does think Rebecca is better than her, and she hates it. She thinks so highly of Rebecca that every hateful word the tiny speaks to her cuts into her soul, even if she'll never let Rebecca know it.

To me, that's the reason why Amber resorts to such cruel punishments. It's not about putting an ignorant tiny her place, no matter how many times she says it is. It's about lashing out against how hurtful Rebecca is to her. That and, in the case of the drawer punishment, Amber not understanding how deadly that could have been (in her first segment, Amber downplayed how bad the heat was, calling Rebecca's complaint about it "nonsense). Again, Rebecca wields enormous power over Amber, and she doesn't even know it.

As for why Rebecca is being so hurtful, I think that, deep down, Rebecca really does care about Amber, and all this slave treatment stings that much more as a result. So Amber gets the only weapon Rebecca has to fight back and make Amber feel some of the pain that Rebecca is feeling: Rebecca's words. Those words are the only thing that allows Rebecca to have any degree of control in her new world at all, even if that control is limited to Amber's emotions. Still, I don't think she realizes just how personal Amber takes her words, because I think she wouldn't attack her quite so viciously if she knew how much emotional pain things like her body shaming tactic put Amber through. She just knows that it upsets Amber, and she likes being able to fight back somehow.

So, ironically enough, I feel like if Amber had it in her to show a little weakness in front of Rebecca, the insults would probably stop and things would be better for the both of them. I don't see Amber doing that, though.

So why do I think that Rebecca really has feelings for Amber? That sex scene. Any doubt I had about that went away after that scene. Rebecca can tell herself that she has to do this all she wants, pretending that Amber will make her answer The Question and worship her pussy, but that's clearly not true. When she told Amber that she was never going to escape these trips and that her life would never amount to more than this, Rebecca stayed calm, no matter how pissed Amber got. There was no fear there. No concern for what would happen. Rebecca seemed damn near tranquil when faced with an angry giant struggling to keep her rage in check.

But put Rebecca in front of a giant vagina and now she's afraid of pissing Amber off? I'm not buying it. Rebecca is telling herself what she needs to in order to justify to herself why she's doing this. The truth is that she wants to pleasure Amber. No matter how many times Amber makes her do this, there's no way she'd let herself get so good at it if she didn't like it on some level. She knew just where to lick and how to bite, as well as the time to abandon clit and go deeper inside, where she also knew just what to do. These are the actions of a willing tiny. There's no doubt in my mind.

That's why Rebecca becomes overwhelmed by the sight and scent of Amber's pussy, why she subjects herself to saying what Amber wants to hear, that she's the slave and that Amber is the master. It's what she has to say to get what she wants. Amber was right all those times she told Rebecca that Rebecca loves it. And Amber exerts a degree of control with the carrot that she can never get out of the stick. But Amber let's her anger get the better of her and punishes Rebecca for her defiance (which I think at least a part of Amber respects). It wasn't until that anger melted away that Amber decided to fuck Rebecca, which gave her exactly what she wanted: someone who is better than her calling her master.

Also, Amber clearly loves Rebecca in there because she cares for Rebecca, even if her fucked up worldview makes it hard for either Rebecca or us to realize it. But I think that's why Amber put Rebecca on her stomach to sleep with her in what was a really tender moment amid all that emotional turmoil preceding it.

Oh, and I love that Amber hates all the other stuck up kids too. That little interaction with Naomi at Amber's door was interesting. As was that last segment with Naomi. At first glance, that seems like this scene was put in just for a bit of crush action, but if you're going to do with Naomi what I think you're going to do, then I think this segment might be a nice bit of foreshadowing as far as the main plot is concerned.

So yeah, once again I really enjoyed this chapter, and I was happy to see it come early even, even if I didn't get around to reading it for a bit. Excellent work as always, and I'm eager to see what our girls' and Trevor's time on Azurea Isle has in store for them in the chapter(s) ahead.

Author's Response:

Hey you! 

NGL I definitely refresh my review page an extra few times a day looking for your post ;)

Glad to see you jump in again, as usual most of your analysis are on or near the mark. 

I'm finding it hard to comment on any one specific point because you're going hard into the plot/characters and I don't want to give anything away. So please forgive me for this short response. 

I will say I do try to make all scenes meaningful, whether to push the plot or establish character motivations/insights, and you're definitely picking up on that. 

I am currently facing a bit of a conundrum, you see I have all the Azurea Isle chapters done and I want to release them twice every week for the next few weeks, but I'm not sure if I'll have time to edit my stuff that comes after that, and then there will be a lull in the releases come late Januray. So I'm more inclined to make a single release every week but I realllllyyy want you guys to read this storyline so I want to release twice a week lol

Oh well if I post tomorrow you'll know what I decided :D

Thanks as always man, I really look forward to these write-ups of yours, I got in late last night and read through this one like 5 times in bed. They mean a lot to me and I thank you dearly for them :)

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2024 12:58 AM Title: PART 13

So happy to have a chapter now. this one is really good. I love the Rebecca Amber relations more and more its so nice to see Rebecca fight back even if she know she is powerless .Just the crush part at the end is not what i enjoy  enjoy most. Other than that it's perfect as usual. 

Author's Response:

Hey thanks for the comment as always :)

yeah Rebecca certainly isn't shy about speaking her mind that's for sure lol

Sad to hear you are not enjoying the crush parts as much as the others, there is more to come in the next few chapters. They are at Azurea Isle where there are no laws protecting tiny people, after all.  ¯_(ツ)_/¯