[Report This]Date: January 01 2025 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Infiltration (Ren)
Ryemi is definitely one of my favorites right now. Looks like I was kind of right about her being able to copy domains but I thought she was a goddess herself. Considering her powers literally drains her life span im surprised mimi let her go down to find Ryan or maybe she went on her own without permission.
Im pretty confident that Ryemi will eventually eat a shard of origin and that will heal her and make her a proper goddess. Also it seems that Ryemi and Ren are more like father and daugher rather than romantic which is nice and wholesome. But with the comments Ren sometimes makes about Ryemis body, I wouldn't be surprised if it did turn out romantic after all lol.
Layla is very suspicious and she has art drawn of her so im pretty sure she has something to do with the goddesses and might be the reason why faye even found them in the first place.
I like how Cornwell was willing to kill ryan when he wanted to leave due to how serious they were about security but now there is nothing stopping people from leaving and exposing the barrier even while a goddess is looking at that spot. I guess security really went downhill after Cornwell disappeared lol
As for the ending, my prediction it was Ryan who was responsible for saving them. Since it has to be someone familiar with the technology and although Ryan was with Jacob before, but he was completely absent in minas chapter so im assuming he must have left. Maybe he somehow found out Faye was going to attack and rushed back to save Artemis. Would also finally let ryan and ryemi meet lmao
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the comment!
I would like to say this was a very excellent analysis of the chapter, very clear cut and substantiated deductions made about multiple characters including Cornwell, Ryemi, Fae and Ryan.
I won't reveal if you got any of them right, but I'll hurry up with the release of the next chapter so that you can see for yourself. Until then, please keep reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2024 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Infiltration (Ren)
Ren (almost) gets flattened by giant Ryemi booba
it should have been me not him.jpg
It was interesting to see that the goddesses already know about Artemis; one would've thought the portal was too insignificant from their perspective.
Splendid work keeping us hooked for 30 chapters since the start of this series, looking forward to how the rest of this plays out!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it!
Next chapter will be coming out soon and it's one of my personal favorites. I hope it can keep you hooked all the way through.
P.S. Very minor spoilers but I would just like to say that there will be A LOT more of Ryemi booba by the time the story ends.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2024 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Infiltration (Ren)
Noooooo!!!! Ren do something hell where is Mimi god damn it !!!!! Ryemi please don’t die !!!!! She’s the only goddess that gives a damn about humanity !!!!
great chapter
ps - so this is the last part of this overall story or will there be spinoffs still just wondering?
Author's Response:
Part 2 will be the last official installment of The Origin but I do plan to make a sequel set in the same universe with a completely different setting and style. Of course, I will be working on spinoffs and short stories too whenever I get any inspiration.
Without spoiling anything about the ending, I will also say that there may be more than just one sequel series for The Origin, but we will see when we get there. I won't promise anything more until I gauge the reactions of readers after the ending.
Thanks for always supporting the series!