Well sorry you are taking a long break, but hey RL stuff is important. I must say this is one of the stories I always look forward to with great anticipation. I have loved every chapter and find the developing relationships to be what drives my interest. Keep up the great writing! As a writer myself I know it can be difficult to keep coming up with new ways to do the things you've already done. So I appreciate that you are letting the relationships develop and hopefully that will influence the sex as well going forward, making it something new.

Personally I am not an ass person, but you make those scenes seem almost tolerable to me, and luckily you put in a lot of other scenes too. Although I would like to see a lot more detail in your pussy scenes too, as you do for the ass scenes.

I think it would be interesting to see the foot scenes develop into a bit more too, for example maybe Trevor starts to make love to the toes of Donnica as he seems to really love her, but doesn't treat Amber the same way.

I think there is a lot of room for experimentation going forward.

Have a great break, and hope to see more of this story in the New Year!

You weren't lying about that very, very, VERY soon stuff! Damn did all that anticipation from Donnica threatening to crush all her former co-workers pay off in a big way here!

But the Amber/Rebecca stuff stuck out to me even more. Mostly, I was surprised to see how much power Rebecca has over Amber.

That may sound weird, given all the cleaning and licking of Amber's feet Rebecca did at the start of the chapter, but it's pretty clear that Rebecca's words hit Amber at least as hard as Amber's humiliating demands do Rebecca.

We saw this at the start of the chapter, when Rebecca tells Amber that she sucks at soccer. Amber predictably gets pissed, thinks of Rebecca as an annoying worm, and revels in putting the tiny in her place. But Rebecca's words linger in Amber's head, and Amber has to know what Rebecca meant, so she asked. A goddess wouldn't care about a critique from a bug, would she? Not only does Amber care about Rebecca's opinion on this, but she gets pissed when Rebecca keeps licking her feet (like she told Rebecca to do in the first place) and can't keep her frustration contained. She even called Rebecca by name when yelling at her!

This trend continues as the scene progresses, with Amber acting less like Rebecca's owner and more like a stubborn teen reluctantly trying to get more advice while protecting her pride, defending her style of play at first and hinting at other things she wanted Rebecca's opinion on without asking outright. Amber's mood keeps softening throughout the conversation, seeming happy and even playfully teasing Rebecca in a way I think she thought Rebecca would enjoy (more on that in a minute).

Then, Rebecca, not in the mood for any of that shit, ruins Amber's happiness with a simple insult about Amber being at the bottom of the depth chart, and Amber, in her anger, once again uses Rebecca's name. Not worm. Not bug. Rebecca. And for the rest of the segment, Amber's joy at the thought of dominating Rebecca and showing her who's in charge was hampered by the urge to immediately put Rebecca's advice to practice. Amber was inspired by Rebecca's coaching.

Finally, at the end of the segment, we find out that Rebecca is always getting into Amber's head and under her skin. Rebecca's words now have a profound impact, have power even, over Amber, even if neither of the girls fully understand this.

And then in the back end of the chapter, we see how defensive Amber gets when others are fucking with Rebecca, even when they don't know they're doing it. That was significant to me not only because of how protective and possessive she was of Rebecca but also because of how harsh she was with her teammates. Maybe some of the way Amber has treated Trevor and Rebecca is more of a personality trait, a reflection of a deeper issue in her life, or even possibly a mental health condition. I just thought that Amber addressing them with the same degree of anger and harshness that she has the tinies up until now stood out here.

But the sweetest thing about this chapter by far was how much seeing Rebecca's pride in her meant to Rebecca. First, we found out that part of Amber's rage at her full-sized teammates was because they "ruined her moment." In other words, telling Rebecca and seeing the tiny's reaction was more important to Amber than getting along with her (I'll say it again) normal-sized teammates. Hell, Amber didn't even tell them that she was starting when they tried to insult her by asking if she had been cut, choosing to just tell them she was playing rather than rubbing the fact that she was starting in their faces. She wanted to save that news for Rebecca.

Which leads to a larger point. Amber didn't care about her teammates hearing her good news. She didn't even think to call her mother, who clearly would have wanted to know, based on that phone conversation at the start of the chapter. No, the only person she wants to share this moment with is Rebecca. Amber wanted to make the tiny proud. And when she did, it was such a heartwarming moment, especially with Rebecca trying so hard to not feel that way but failing.

Oh, and there's also a very noticeable change in Amber's language in this chapter. She no longer refers to Rebecca as a pussy slave, but she talked a whole lot about fucking the tiny. Before, it was about Rebecca eating her ass then, after Trevor's negotiation, her pussy. Now, putting Rebecca inside her is sex to Amber. I doubt the big even noticed the change in her own perception here, but I think it says a lot about what Amber really thinks of Rebecca, regardless of how she treats the tiny.

Rebecca is a bit harder to get a read on, though. Amber and Rebecca herself both ask why Rebecca is helping Amber with the soccer advice. I don't think Rebecca believes her "I'm probably just bored" excuse. Amber, on the other hand, thinks it's because Rebecca secretly loves the way Amber treats her, and I'm starting to wonder if the teen might be on to something.

Of course, we saw Rebecca's resolve start to crack when Amber kept insisting that the tiny "fucking loves it" when Amber treats her like shit and makes her worship the spoiled giantess. But this exchange made me go back to that first segment and think more about Rebecca's "act of defiance" when she kept licking Amber's toe. That's how Amber saw it, at least. We never really saw Rebecca's thought on it. Was she trying to use Amber's words against her in a mild act of protest, or was she too into her new task to properly make out Amber's new demand? I honestly can't tell.

Rebecca had already started to accept going up Rebecca's assault few chapters earlier, writing it off by thinking that "even the worst situations normalize after enough time." But is that what was happening the and, more importantly, is it what's happening now?

I think the fact that she still seemed legitimately grossed out inside Amber's cleat would suggest otherwise. And ghe fact that the other girls' feet made things so much worse for her seems to confirm that she's not just adapting to the shit treatment or terrible smells. There's not enough evidence to know for sure yet (or at least i didn't see enough), but I think it's all about who is doing this to her, as opposed to the natural submissiveness Amber thinks all tinies possess. I think a part of her really does like Amber. That's why she helped her. That's why the "slave" stuff doesn't terrify her anymore (more on that in a second). That's why she was proud of Amber's accomplishment.

I also noticed that while Rebecca's actual resistance to Amber doesn't amount to much anymore, the tiny has no problem speaking her mind and upseting Amber. Not once did Rebecca beg Amber for mercy like before in this chapter. But Rebecca also didn't basically ask for death like she did before, either. She talks shit to Amber without fear of the consequences. She knows she's not getting crushed now, sure, but I think there's more to this than that. I'd say Rebecca likes getting under Amber's skin, but we didn't really see that from her, either.

So I think this comes down to two things:

1. Part of Rebecca enjoys the banter

2. On some level, Rebecca actually trusts Amber, so it doesn't matter what she says.

Those are my best guesses, anyway. It'll be really interesting to see how these two continue to develop, but I really, really like where this seems to be going.

But back to Donnica, that scene with the tiny restaurant was phenomenal. Like I said above somewhere (there's a lot of words up there!), you did a great job of building anticipation for this moment. Everytime she threatened to crush one of her former co-workers if they didn't obey her, if they screwed up, or if she simply decided to, I was waiting for her to actually follow through. Not that how she actually treated them wasn't satisfying, too, but each time she showed mercy and kept them as slaves instead left me wondering if the next time was the time she'd crush a tiny.

So to see her get her revenge by squishing so many tinies all at once (and the restaurant!) was so great! The way each lethal step felt unique, with different expressions on her face or timing with her steps, was masterfully done. And I loved Annabel's reaction to it all! That tease at the end with Annabel searching to rubble for survivors, hinting that she found some to crush, was the perfect way to end the segment.

Donnica's feelings for Trevor continue to be intriguing. The way she both loves and hates the way Trevor talks to her is awesome! She hates that he makes her not feel like a goddess when he talks to her like a girlfriend, but she loves that he's untamed, that he, again, sees the real her. Not a symbol of power or a source of fear. He sees her, and he chooses her, despite keeping his own will, something that she finds delightfully maddening.

But even if she wasn't into him treating her like that, she still wouldn't take control of him like she does everyone else, regardless of size. She loves and respects him too much to do that. As she herself pointed out, he gave her everything. She didn't take it from him or trick him into giving these things up. He did it willingly, knowing exactly who he was giving everything to. That's something she's clearly never had before, and despite thinking she deserves the world, this is the one thing she seems to value above all else.

And Trevor is hilarious in how he deals with her here. He knowingly teases and jokes with her, pushing her buttons for fun and even making her wait. I love how comfortable he is with her while the rest of those in her life are constantly on edge.

That cute couple talk near the end was so endearing, and I really enjoy seeing this side of Donnica, especially after seeing so much of the side she shows the world. And her "threatening" him by saying he'd be banned from her ass for a week if he didn't get in there right now was so perfect! She'd never make him do something against his will, but that doesn't mean she can't find other ways to get him to do what she wants. This fit so well with "whiney Donnica," too.

Lastly, going all the way back to the start of the chapter, the disconnect between Amber and Donnica was kind of sad. Donnica wants everything in her world to be perfect, and that placed so much pressure on Amber that she no longer had fun playing soccer. The saddest part is that I don't think this is intentional on Donnica's part. She just wants the best fir her daughter but doesn't know how to communicate that, so it comes off as blaming and pressuring Amber. I think that's why Donnica's tone softened at the end of the conversation. By the way, I love that we didn't get to hear Donnica's side of it, leaving it open to interpretation.

But yeah, I'm really starting to think that this story might be leading up to some kind of confrontation between Donnica and Amber but not over Trevor, as the early chapters led us to think. I'm so curious to see how this relationship continues to take shape.

Anyway, that's enough out of me. Excellent work once again, and enjoy your holiday!

enjoy your holidays - deserve the break after cranking out chapters of this. loved this chapter as always, especially Donnica realizing how much she treasures her little butt boy